BRYSON: Well.Amina,thanks for letting me haveyour draft in such good time.
AMINA: Oh,that's alright.I was just very anxious tohear what you think of it.You can see that I decidedto change the topic - I had been interested in lookingat Barings Factory.
BRYSON: Oh,I think the hospital was a much betterchoice.In fact...well...I have to say that I thought itwas good.
AMINA: Oh?
BRYSON: There's still lots of work to be done...
AMINA: Oh yes...of course.
BRYSON: But there's plenty of good ideas.It opens well and the first chapter is fine but themiddle section really stood out for me...most interesting.
AMINA: That's amazing because I really didn't find it a bit casy to write...
BRYSON: How long did you work on the whole thing?
AMINA: Well,I spent about two or three weeks reading and doing general research and then Idashed the writing off very quickly...so about four weeks in all.
BRYSON: Well,that's aboout par for the course.You've got a while yet to make the changes.
AMINA: Oh right...no problem...