BRYSON: Right.Let's have a look at my noteshere.OK.Starting with section headings...the broaddivisions are good but you'll have to re-do the actualheadings.I've made some suggestions in themargins...
AMINA: OK.Thanks.
BRYSON: Now,this information on local housing...Ican see why you put it there but it really isn'trelevant to the approach you've taken.
AMINA: I think I see what you mean.
BRYSON: Now...what did I say about the interviews?
AMINA: I worked very hard on those.I really thought they were valuable.
BRYSON: They are,Amina,but they're very complex and rather unclear at the moment.You'regoing to have to spend a bit of time making the data a lot clearer.
AMINA: OK...as long as I don't have to remove them altogether...
BRYSON: No,don't worry.
AMINA: What about the chronology...the list of dates?I wasn't sure whether I should rewritethose.
BRYSON: My advice on that is to take them out.I feel it makes the whole piece appear toosimplistic.
AMINA: OK,if it'll help.