7. 问题 有人认为年轻人没有什么东西可以较年长的人。
Agree:
- No life experience
- Still learning basics
- Immature attitude
Disagree:
- Fresh eyes
- Different perspective
- Open to technology
Topic sentence
- I disagree that young people have nothing to teach those who are older because young people possess learning particular to
youth.
Supporting sentences
- Most young people are naturally curious and are not already tired of what they have seen.
- Fresh eyes help them discover new ways of seeing old ideas or of inventing entirely new ones.
- Young people observe and interpret the world they inherited from older people and are not afraid of change.
Closing sentence (optional)
- For these reasons, I feel that young people have much to teach older people.
I disagree that young people have nothing to teach those who are older because young people possess learning particular to
youth. Firstly, most young people are naturally curious and are not already tired of what they have seen. Secondly, these fresh
eyes help them discover new ways of seeing old ideas or of inventing entirely new ones. As a result of this perspective, young
people have been credited with many scientific and technological discoveries. In fact, it is the older generation who is
following the lead of many young people, especially in technology. Young people observe and interpret the world they
inherited from older people and are not afraid of change. For these reasons I feel that young people have much to teach older
people.
问题 有的人认为女性不是好的兵役候选者。
Agree:
- physically weaker
- poor in math and science
- emotional
Disagree:
- train hard
- intelligent
- strategic thinkers
Topic sentence
- Given the technological advances in the military, I have to disagree with those who think women are not good candidate for
service.
Supporting sentences
- Training strength is not needed for newer lightweight equipment and non-battle situations.
- Women can bring their keen intelligence to help meet today’s military needs.
- Women process information differently and form different strategies from men.
Closing sentence (optional)
- Women trained hard to be both mentally and physically prepared for duty.
Given the technological advances in the military, I have to disagree with those who think women are not good candidates for
service. Traditional strength is not needed for newer lightweight equipment and non-battle situations. Women can bring their
keen intelligence to help meet today’s military needs. Some of this new work calls for sophisticated computer skills. Women
are known to multi task and interpret well. Also known are women’s fine motor skill and reflexes that suit high tech positions.
Meanwhile military strategists welcome the different approaches to strategic thinking that women bring as a result of the way
they process information. In conclusion, women train hard to be both mentally and physically prepared for duty. There are just
some of the reasons women are good candidates for military service.
1. 问题 姨妈工作的公司有一个你想要的暑期工作,你是想通过自己的力量申请这个工作,还是想摆脱姨妈说句
话。说明中须包括你所做选择的利弊。
Choice A: apply
- merit
- no embarrassment
- less pressure
Choice B: influence
- familiar contact
- advance over others
- acceptance
Preference: - using aunt’s influence
Topic sentence
- I would like definitely enlist the help of my aunt in finding a job in the company where she works.
Supporting sentences
- The job market is tight these days and I think that an applicant should use every advantage.
- I might influence the hiring manager if my aunt can put in a good word for me.
Opposing View:
- It is risky to count to my aunt’s reputation or her ability to influence decisions.
- It might make it awkward for my boss to correct me.
Closing statement:
- However, given the competition for jobs, I would ask my aunt to help me land a job at her company.
I would definitely enlist the help of my aunt in finding a job in the company where she works. The job market is tight these
days and I think that an applicant should use every advantage. It might influence the hiring manager if my aunt can put in a
good word for me. The manager might fell more confident in hiring someone who is already familiar with the company and
therefore I might be more likely to be accepted by the staff. On the other hand, it is risky to count on my aunt’s reputation or
her ability to influence decisions. The disadvantage of having an inside contact is that I will always wonder if I could have
been hired on my own merit. And, while on the job it might make it awkward for my boss to correct me if it might make both
my aunt and me feel bad. However, given the competition for jobs, I would ask my aunt to help me land a job at her company.
2. 问题 人们可以通过两种方式到其他国家去“旅游”。一种是真的实地去旅游,另一种则是通过读书或文章来进
行假象旅游。你喜欢哪一种?说明中必须包括你所做选者的利弊。
Choice A: Actual travel
- exciting to plan
- authentic experience (music, food, events)
- meet new friends
Choice B: Virtual travel
- cheaper
- safer
- unlimited resource
Preference: - actual travel
Topic sentence
- I prefer real travel to a country over virtual travel from the comfort of my home.
Supporting sentences
- Real life travel holds great excitement at al stages.
- A real life traveler experiences the excitement of buying food and getting directions, sometimes in a foreign
language.
- I can buy souvenirs and will have memories of music, food and new friends.
Opposing view
- While reading about a country, I will never run out of money or have to worry about terrorism.
- There are maps, dictionaries and videos to refer to.
Closing statement
- For me, taking a trip somewhere always beats virtual travel.
I prefer real travel to a country over virtual travel from the comfort of my home. I do, however, see advantages for both
modes of “travel”. Real life travel hold a great excitement at all stages. Planning on paper is fun, but nothing can take the
place of really landing in a foreign airport and feeling the blast of air from a new climate on your face. Of course, the traveler
reading their way into a country will never run of money partway through a trip. Nor do they have to worry about robbery or
terrorism. While a real life traveler experience the excitement of buying food and getting directions, sometimes in a foreign
language, the home-based traveler has all the maps, dictionaries and videos to refer to. Naturally, the home traveler can stop
anytime. However, the virtual traveler can’t bring home the souvenirs of a trip such as music, food and new friends he
discovers on a trip. For me, taking a trip somewhere always beats virtual travel.