范例：看OG的范例回答
Bus Service Elimination Planned
Important Points(字数102)
The university plans to eliminate the bus service because it is too expensive to run and too few students use it. (一句话概括阅读材料的内容)The man disagrees with the university plan. (谈话人态度)He believes the reason few students take the bus is that the route goes to neighborhoods where students do not live. If the routes were changed, many more students would ride the bus. (两句话讲谈话人的第一个观点：校车路线。注意改路线的建议是采用虚拟语气来表述的)The man disagrees with the way the university plans to use the money it saves on the bus service. Building more parking lots on campus will encourage more students to drive on campus. This would increase noise and traffic on campus.(谈话人第二个观点：增加停车场。首先讲谈话人观点：disagree with the way…然后将后果1后果2)"
范例：OG的范例回答，字数147
The man in the scene said he wanted to keep the bus service for the better being of students on campus, because there is some students who can not afford the car, therefore they use the free bus service even though it isn’t that much. The problem with bus service right now is going through wrong neighbour where it is too expensive for students to live, so what they should do is just change the course of bus. And that will take of the problem. Also, they should encourage more students to use the bus service instead of discourage them. Or () if they us the money that they use for bus service to increase the space of the parking lot for the students, which will add to the noise of the campus and will be more congested for all the people who already parking over there.
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