分析一道托福口语机经示范答案。
Should the government spend money on projects that can encourage its citizens to lead a healthier lifestyle?
Absolutely yes. My reasons are quite simple.
开门见山，表明态度。
For one thing, it can improve citizens' health and increase their living quality. According to WHO more than 75% of people are suffering sub-health in the world. People nowadays live at a hectic pace,racing for school or for work; they go to KFC or MacDonald, eating junk food or fast food; they sit up late, working or partying at night. So it's time for the government to do something good.
答题一定要有连接词，但不建议用first,second这样模板性很强的词汇。数据法是非常值得鼓励的较权威的论证方法，但一定要可考，除了与自己相关的事情可以胡编乱造以外，要为自己说的每一句话负责。例子的排比能显示论据的充足，同时能增强说理效果。
For another thing, it can reduce money spent on insurance and medical care. Like my dad-he paid a high price for drinking too much alcohol a few years ago. It cost him a lot of money on insurance, doctor’s visits and medicines.
每个论点都要有论据去支撑，最触手可及的论据就是你自己生活圈子里的人和事。答题时如果想不到惊天地泣鬼神比较轰动的事迹，就举身边的例子，反而会更真实可信。
These are the reasons why I agree with this statement.
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