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1、Original：It is in intelligence that makes people successful and earn large sum of bucks and gain great reputation!
Revised：So，I believe it is intelligence that leads to success in terms of financial wealth and reputation.
buck有“美元”的意思，但这是一种非常不正式的说法。在写作中所使用的语言要注意整体的风格，如果在正式的写作中出现及其口语化或俚语化的词语，会让阅卷者感到很突兀。
2、Original：The international banks are cognizant of the new law's significance.
Revised：The international banks are aware of the new law'significance.
cognizant是十分正式的词(属于jargon)，此处用aware即可，在
所以说我们在进行SAT写作练习以前要先明确文章的风格，在用词上表达恰当，避免上面所提到的错误的出现。