9月份雅思写作考试中小作文部分出现考试题型包括表格类、柱形图类。大作文出现了社会与政策类单边讨论题型。接下来
小作文
题目The diagram shows how soft cheese is made
范文解析：本文是一篇流程图，展示了软干酪的加工过程。流程图本身很简洁，每个阶段也很清晰，分成5个部分，主体部分可以分成两段。前三个步骤一段，后两个步骤一段。写作过程中有两点要特别注意，一是每个步骤之间的衔接要变换语言表达。二是不要遗漏细节，例如时间，温度等。
范文：
The flow chart given demonstrates how to make soft cheese. There are five steps in total.
In the first stage, the raw materials, milk and water, are poured into a container to be mixed. Then the mixture is transferred to another container where it will be cooled at a temperature of 5 degrees for 2 hours. After that, salt is added to the mixture and it will be fermented at a temperature of 37 degrees. This stage lasts for 6 hours.
In the fourth phase, the mixture becomes thicker and thicker when it is evaporated at 100 degrees for 8 hours. Finally, in the last step, the evaporated mixture is cooled at 5 degrees again and this process lasts for 6 hours. After all these stages, soft cheese is made successfully.
Overall, the whole process starts from mixing raw materials and ends in cooling and we can find out that it takes a day to turn water and milk into soft cheese.
大作文
类型:社会类
题目:In some countries the widespread use of internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of traveling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
范文解析:本文是一篇教育类和科技类结合的题目。近年来，话题之间的交叉和结合已经成为趋势，同学们要注意。题目中给出的是一种现象，由于互联网的出现，人们可以在家工作或上大学。题目问的是这种趋势的好处是否大于坏处。
文章结构首段，改写题目，提出观点，建议大家这种利弊分析型的题目在首段就开门见山地提出观点。第二段让步，先论述这个现象的缺点：过多地使用电脑可能引发一些健康问题，并举了一些例子。第三段转折，论述第一个优点，可以节省时间，尤其是对工作的人来说，这样他们就可以有时间去发展个人兴趣。第四段递进，论述第二个优点，更加灵活，学生们可以根据自己的情况自由安排学习时间，员工们也不需要一直穿着制服工作，可以有更多的选择。最后一段总结全文，重述自己观点，注意结尾段不要加新的内容，表明观点就可以，但注意语言表达不要和首段重复。
范文
In some countries the widespread use of internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of traveling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays, with the advance of technology, people have easy access to the Internet, which makes working or studying at home realizable. From my point of view, I believe the merits of this trend outweigh the demerits.
The first and most immediate concern that comes to people’s mind is that excessive exposure to computers is detrimental to people’s health. To be specific, for many people, for example, students, they may spend their leisure time playing computer games or watching TV and in this case, if they study at home through the internet, sitting in front of the screen for hours, it may give rise to a range of health problems like myopia and obesity.
However, there are more benefits. The most obvious advantage is saving time. The traffic is becoming increasingly crowded these days and it costs working people amounts of time on the road. If they can work at home, commuting will not be a problem and people can use the time saved to develop their personal interests, which can contribute to the well-being of individuals.
Apart from this, it is more flexible to work or study at home.
For students, instead of attending lectures and seminars at fixed time, they can download them from the internet and watch them whenever they have time and energy. For people in the workplace, they do not have to wear suits or high heels all day; they can wear casual and comfortable clothes when working.
In conclusion, although people may suffer from some illnesses, this problem can be remitted through some physical activities in the weekends and at the same time, working or studying at home does boost efficiency and brings convenience to both students and employees.