雅思写作备考中，很多考生为了让文章内容更丰富，很容易就会有点生拉硬凑的感觉，句子之间的连续性很差，从而写作分数也不会很高，今天雅思写作句子间的连续性与十个雅思写作高分句子。
Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2014.07.09真题)
有些人认为年轻人应当被要求至少在18岁以前接受全日制的教育。你在多大程度上同意这个观点?
Nowadays, education is one of the most important factors that determine our life.Some people argue that full-education should be made compulsory for teenagers under 18 years old. However, I am of the opinion that it should be discouraged.
There is no denying that full time education is essential if one wants to live a high quality life. Good education will give him a well-paid job. (以下省略100字。。。)
Having said that, full-time education is an important factor of our life, but it is not the only one. (以下省略100字。。。)
To sum up, although teenagers who receive full time education are more likely to be successful, part time education can be applied to some groups of students.
原文：However, I am of the opinion that it should be discouraged.
分析：it 代词可以用于指代，但有时也会给人模糊不清的感觉。
修改后：However, I am of the opinion that this kind of practice should be discouraged.
然而，我的观点是，这种做法应当不被鼓励。
点评：这里使用“this kind of +名词”的结构，类似于中文的“这种…”，使指代更加清晰。除此之外还有，“this kind of behavior, this kind of phenomenon”(这种行为，这种现象)等等。
原文：Education is an important factor of our life, but it is not the only one.
分析：很多同学只会使用“however, but”表示转折，这里可以考虑用“while/although”(尽管，虽然”这类高级一点的连接词替换，这样句子就包含了从句，句子的复杂性提升了。
修改后：While education is an important factor of our life, it is not the only one.
原文：There is no denying that full time education is essential if one wants to live a high quality life. Good education will give him a well-paid job.
无可否认，如果一个人想要高品质的生活，全日制的教育是必要的。好的教育会给他一高收入的工作。
分析：原文的两句话隐含着因果关系，用because/as 表示原因，想必同学都已经熟悉了。可是当前一个句子已经是包含从句的句子时，再用“because”就会出现特别复杂而冗长的句子。要知道，雅思作文不是句子绝不是越长越复杂越好的。比如这里把句子改成: There is no denying that full time education is essential if one wants to live a high-quality life because good education will give him a well-paid job. 这种显然不太合适，出现了从句套从句的结构是基础一般的同学尤其要避免这样容易犯错的句子。 这里给同学推荐一个大家都知道却不太会主动使用的表达：“This is because”，类似中文的“这是因为…”
修改后：There is no denying that full time education is essential if one wants to live a high-quality life. This is because good education will give him a well-paid job.
无可否认，如果一个人想要高品质的生活，全日制的教育是必要的。这是因为好的教育会给他一份收入高的工作。
十个雅思写作高分句子：
1, if there is no health, wisdom can not be revealed, culture can not be exerted, strength can not fight, knowledge can not be used.
2, health comes from healthy habits and habits, health needs optimistic, cheerful attitude towards life.
3, money is difficult to buy health, health is greater than money, money is difficult to buy happiness, happiness must have health, happiness in life is not in fame and wealth in health, the body is not strong, money in sports!
4, health, but also a good companion with us for more than ten years, good friends, we can say is inseparable!
5, six can not: can not be hungry to eat, can not drink, drink, can not sleep trapped, can not be tired before the rest, can not be sick before they can not check the old regret.
6, if a person has a healthy body, mind and culture, it is a very proud thing. The physical thought and the cultural health paved a brilliant road for my growth, and laid a good foundation for my future happy life.
7, three forget: forget the age, forget the past, forget the grudge.
8, only with a healthy upward psychology, in order to overcome all difficulties, difficulties, do not yield.
9, no one in the world will be happy for their own health, if there is, it must be a fool. So I say, to treasure health is to cherish happiness!
10, the health of the body, psychological health and cultural health, has always been accompanied by my growth, and constantly let me forge ahead on the road of success.
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