2017年6月3日雅思写作考试真题范文解析

2022-05-31 12:21:20

  2017年6月3日雅思写作考试真题范文解析!考试结束后,

  雅思写作大作文题目Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?大城市生活有害健康。同意与否?

  解析

  本次雅思写作涉及的话题是大城市对人们身体健康的影响,这是2014年3月1日的原题重现。2017年雅思写作不断重复2014-2015的原题,请烤鸭格外关注一下这两年的考试题目,说不定会有惊喜产生。

  当然,这个话题本身是很容易构思,也容易写的,因为类似的讨论在我们的日常生活中经常发生。记得很早以前,我们就在讨论到底住在乡下还是城市好,无非就是乡下空气好,人际关系亲近,但医疗条件和文化生活相对就差一些,而大城市则是空气污浊,噪音很大,而且人际关系冷漠,但可以享受较好的医疗教育机会,可以参与更多的文化活动,等等。而本题重点是放在身体健康方面。稍微想一下,我们就可以提炼一些观点出来。比如,大城市的空气和噪音污染的确不利于我们的身体健康;大城市复杂的人际关系和剧烈的竞争也不利于我们的心理健康;但是大城市良好的医疗条件却有利于我们的身体。因此,我们的结论就是:大城市的环境的确不利于我们的身体健康,但大城市的医疗条件对我们身体康复却是有利的。

  参考范文:

  Big cities such as London, Melbourne and Vancouver have attracted millions of people to settle down there both domestically and internationally. While some people are worried that living in big cities could pose threats to people's health, I tend to think otherwise in general.

  People who have health concerns towards life in big cities might argue that large cities are usually occupied with high buildings and bombarded with traffic congestion and that the manufacture of industries always cause air pollution and sometimes even water contamination. Therefore, it is difficult for people who live there get access to fresh air and nature environment, and people's life could be put at risk.

  However, these are the pictures Of a small proportion of cities in less developed countries. As a matter of fact, today many more large cities in developing and developed countries have suffered from these problems no more or at least on their way to being more to live. For example, in many cities public contracts for roads and buildings now are only be awarded to firms that have a good environmental track with the of the permission of the city council, and the responsibility of the city council is to keep the green area above a certain level.Additionally, many governments are encouraging convenient, reliable and affordable public transports to reverse the trend of mass car ownership, and in some cities for instance Amsterdam there are networks of cycle lanes and other facilities for cyclists which are more environmentally sound. More importantly, large cities are often equipped with the best medical care service such as hospitals and ambulance system, which is essential to everyone and especially necessary for elder citizens. Also, young adults tend to have more accesses to sports facilities and equipment.

  Overall, although living condition in big cities still can be improved, I think the lifestyle there is actually getting healthier and healthier.

  参考范文:

  While enjoying all the conveniences in big cities such as supermarkets, shopping malls, and public transport, many people complain that living in big cities is harmful for our health. This opinion certainly carries a lot of truth, yet it should also be treated with a grain of salt.

  Compared with the rural areas which are usually more peaceful and quiet, big cities are often extremely noisy. The forever crowded streets are full of people rushing back and forth, vehicles hustling along, and stores vying for attention. Besides, with factories producing wastes and vehicles emitting exhaust gas, the air in big cities is often so heavily polluted that many people have to put on a mask when walking outside in the street.

  Then, the busy city life is also negative for our mental health. The fierce competition that exists everywhere in big cities is destructive to our relationship with our colleagues, neighbors, and even friends, resulting in our isolation and loneliness. In order to catch up with the Joneses, we often have to make more money by working extra hours which will eventually affect our health.

  Yet big cities do offer many things that can benefit our health. Big cities, for instance, have better sports facilities and better equipped gyms and stadiums. They also have more parks and gardens. So we can see many city dwellers enjoying themselves by doing sports in gyms or walking in parks on weekends while in the countryside people can only stay at home. More importantly, in big cities, people enjoy better medical services because the best hospitals and medical professionals are often found in big cities rather than rural countryside.

  So it is hard to decide with certainty whether living in big cities is bad or good for our health. Life in big cities does bring about many negative effects on our health (both physical and mental), but it also has much to offer which actually helps us stay healthy.

  2017年6月3日雅思写作小作文题目

  the pie chart below shows the reasons for which undergraduates and postgraduates choose to study at Parker University summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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