雅思写作中肯定会用到各种各样的句型,但是因为文化差异,可能我们写出的句子却表达不出我们真正想表达的意思。今天思写作高分句型的方法及高分句型分享。
1,状语前置
所谓状语前置就是把状语(副词,介词短语,分词,不定式)放到句首。考官会频繁使用这种语法结构,而很多考生却没有意识,这种句式通过一堆长句子中出现一个小短语,可以让句子产生长短结合的紧凑感,实例如下:
1)Unfortunately, professionals from otherfields who make a much greater contributions to human society, are paid so muchless that it is hard to disagree with the statement.
2)Obviously, education systems are based onthe belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire differentskills.
3)Like self-awareness,this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factorsthat may be most important for achieving happiness.
4)As a result of mediaattention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities.
5)With the politicalwill, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce.
2,句中插入短语
和状语前置类似,长句子中间插入一个小短语,可以让句子读起来更轻松灵活。考官实例如下:
1)This will affect the job market, which, afterall, is a key target in any economic plan.
2)Sports stars and pop stars,for example, are soon replaced by the neat younger, more energetic generation.
3)So overall, I believethat, attending schools from a young age is good for most children.
4)Universities, when itis functioning well, should offer both theoretical knowledge as well asprofessional training
3,倒装句
这种语法现象考生都学过,但往往在作文中忘记或没有意识使用。先看两个例子:
1)Parents should spend time on theirchildren. They should also communicate with them.
2) We can never losesight of the significance of education.
这两个句子没有任何错误,但都很单调平淡,如果使用倒装,效果就不一样了。
第一句可以用not only t also 句型来改写成倒装句:Not only should parents spent time on their children, they are alsoadvised to interact with them.
第二句可以否定词提前,强调突出“不可忽视”。On no account/by nomeans/ in no way/never can we lose sight of the significance of education.
考官范文中的倒装例子并不多,主要体现在以下几种情况中:
1)Only in this way can this problem beeffectively solved.
2)We can see that not only are there verylarge differences between these economies, but that these gaps are widening.
3)Strange as it may seem, parents’ attention sometimeshinders students’academic development.
4)Equally important to success in learning a foreignlanguage is constant attention to details.
考生在平时的语言积累和写作练习中,可以多模仿这几种固定句式,在文章中穿插1-2句倒装句。
4,强调句
强调句的句式框架结构为It is+(被强调的成分) that/who+(句子剩余成分), 类似于中文的“正是…导致了…”的意思。例如,考官范文中的例句:
1)It is the interaction of the two thatshapes a person’ personality and dictates how that personalitydevelops.
2)It is only those who reach the very top of theirprofession who can get these huge salaries.
强调句式是考生比较难把握的一种句型,容易和it引导的形式主语相混淆,其实我们可以通过去掉It is… that…/It is…who…的框架看剩下的是否是一个完整的句子来判断强调句写的是否正确。
考生可以以通过以上几种句式结构的介绍,搭配简单句去使用,让句式灵活多变,例如:
例如:“二十世纪末科技的繁荣,人们开始广泛使用电脑”
这句话可以分别用以上介绍的句式结构来变化表达法,使句子做到丰富多变,不再单一重复:
1)witness 句型
Thelate 20th century witnessed the prosperity in science and technology, thusgiving rise to the wide application of computers.
2) With 结构状语前置
With the prosperityin science and technology in the late 20th century, computers were widelyapplied.
3) 倒装句
So flourishing wasthe science and technology in the late 20th century that computers were widelyapplied in various fronts.
4) 强调句
Itwas the prosperity in science and technology in the late 20th century that gaverise to the wide application of computers.
5,平行结构
严格来讲,平行结构并不属于特殊句式,而是英语语法的规范要求,但是由于遵守这个基本语法规则的中国考生太少了,平行结构也升级成了一种“特殊句式”。这种结构的使用在考官范文里出现较多,最常见的形式是在表示并列关系的连接词,例如 and/or等的前后两侧用名词对名词,形容词对形容词,动词不定式对动词不定式,分词短语对分词短语,从句对从句…比如:
1)Satisfaction is alsoincreased by a sense of responsibility for and loyal to a team.
2) Even when childrenuse a computer for other purposes, such as getting information or emailingfriends, it is no substitute for human interaction.
3)Some essays are hardto understand not because they are long but because they are obscure.
4)They will certainlybe the first th help children learn what is important in life, how they areexpected to behave and what role they will play in their world.
剑桥考官在范文中对于平行原则都是严格遵守,考生在这个写作细节句式上希望也可以向官方范文看齐。
看到这里,同学们不难发现,考官范文以及官方剑桥书后的高分范文里,各种复杂句式并不是高分的标准,对文章的整体把握,合理运用各种句型,保证文章的逻辑以及流畅性才是最主要的。当然语法结构正确也是必不可少的评分标准之一!
高分句型分享:
前进类(用来论证好的方面)
1 profit from
People the world over can profit from the advancement in motorized flight.
★2 A is an indispensable part of B.
Advertising has become an indispensable part of our lives and it has been exerting profound influence on the way we live, work , play and learn.
★★3 something plays a pivotal role in…
It is universally acknowledged that education plays a pivotal role in individual success.
★★4 enable somebody to do something
Cultural assimilation enables newly-arrived immigrants to get ahead in the new society successfully.
5 get accustomed to something
New immigrants must get accustomed to the local culture to succeed.
6 Someone can utilise something
In this day and age, many individuals can utilise the Internet via computers or mobile phones.
★7 something is in the best interests of someone
Preserving the endangered animals is in the best interests of humanity.
8 contribute to…
Students should not only learn academic knowledge but also do volunteer work in communities, thereby making contribution to their cities.
9 something consolidates its status as the …
English has been consolidating its status as the dominant language in the world.
倒退类(用来论证负面的方面)
1 …is attended by …
The staggering advancement of technology is attended by severe pollution of the ecosystem.
2 The more…the more…
The more vehicles on the roads, the more traffic congestion to occur.
★3 A can be attributed to B
The proliferation of traffic accidents can be in large measure attributed to the traffic law not being stringent enough.
★4 be afflicted with
In present-day society, a host of countries are afflicted with chronic poverty.
5 deprive someone of something
Modern cities deprive city-dwellers of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life.
6 something impels somebody to do …
Peer pressure often impels youngsters to spend excessively on fancy clothes and accessories.
★7 A has rendered B + 形容词或者名词,
We must ensure that technological innovations will not render us slaves to high technology.
The fast-paced way of life has rendered many people alienated from one another.
8 A recent study conducted by the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences revealed that …(如果是教育问题用UNESCO,如果犯罪问题可以用the Chinese Ministry of Justice ,交通问题可以用the Chinese Ministry of Transportation,建筑问题可以用the Chinese Ministry of Construction,环境问题可以用HSUS and Greenpeace )
A recent study conducted by HSUS and Greenpeace suggested that there were over one million mammals(哺乳动物) in lab cages(笼子) today. 一个数据就说明了人类现在虐待动物的情况有多么严重。当然,请注意这里的数据编得不能太夸张,否则考官就会怀疑数据的真实性了。
9 be addicted to something
In present-day society, many individuals are addicted to / preoccupied with various forms of gambling.
10 something is the root cause of…
The population explosion is the root cause of water scarcity.
★★11 be confronted with something In contemporary society , we are confronted with a plethora of violent and pornographic TV shows.
★★12 pose a threat to …
In the contemporary society, the proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish poses a threat to humanity.
13 be inundated with something
The media are inundated with detailed crime coverage.
14 If ,,,,something will ensue.
If parents neglect their offspring, lack of discipline and respect will ensue.
15With the incidence of…hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.
With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.
★★16 something is unwarranted
Experimenting upon lab animals without trying to alleviate their pain is unwarranted.
17 at the expense of…
We should not develop economy at the expense of the environment.
中间类
1 support (支持)/ oppose(反对) …on the grounds that…
Some oppose animal experimentation on the grounds that it is inhumane.
2 exert beneficial / detrimental / profound influence on sth.
In this day and age, globalization is exerting profound impact on the way we work, live , play and learn.
3 A prevail over / outweigh / outbalance B.
The advantages of punishment for driving offenders prevail over its disadvantages.
4 A create / bring about / generate / breed / engender / spawn / induce B.
Technological innovations have brought about profound changes to the political, economic and cultural arenas.
5 A is a key determinant of B.
In an individual’s career, tenacity is a key determinant of success.
★6 It is manifest that…或者It is universally acknowledged that… Undeniably,..
It is manifest that globalization can bring numerous benefits to the lives of people in the Third-World countries.
7 It is standard practice for someone to do something
In contemporary China, it is standard practice for Chinese youths to choose Hollywood blockbusters over domestic films.
8 A is best characterized by …
A fine journalist is best characterized by discipline, determination and penetrating observations.
9 A constitutes…
Animal experimentation , in some cases ,constitutes cruel abuse of test animals.
★10 someone would be well-advised to do something
Parents would be well-advised if they spend more time with their offspring.
解决类
★★1 give priority to something
The government should give priority to the optimization of its financial resources.
2 dedicate A to B
The government should dedicate more money to the alleviation of chronic poverty.
3 be likely to fall prey to / be vulnerable to
Without proper parental guidance, children are very vulnerable to the violent or pornographic content on TV shows.
4 something should be condemned rather than condoned.
Indiscriminate copying of traditional architectural style today should be condemned rather than condoned.
5 it is imperative / crucial / key / essential that…或者something is of paramount / overriding importance.
To the newly-arrived immigrants, it is imperative that they adapt to the local culture promptly(及时的).
6 something requires / necessitates / calls for …
The severe ecological problem requires / necessitates / calls for joint effort of all the nations on the globe.
7 distinguish between A and B
Many youngsters lack the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong.
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