一篇好的雅思作文不仅看作者的排篇布局的能力,还要看作者语言的表达能力。语言素材是需要积累的,下面
雅思写作语言素材积累:教育类
It is better for students to live away from home while studying at university than live at home with parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 孩子们应在大学学习,而不是在家里和父母住,是否认同?
= Nowadays, sending children to a boarding school is becoming increasingly popular. Why is this case? Do you think it is a positive development? 寄宿学校的原因以及利弊讨论?
寄宿学校的原因:
1. 保障学习的学生们应该住在大学连续性,尤其是对于父母工作需要不断迁移的学生而言。
2. 父母有意识地培养孩子们的群体性成长经验。
寄宿学校的利好:
1. 孩子们可以通过住校锻炼独立性, 比如自己学会了洗衣服,整理房间, 处理学习中的问题,这些能力的培养对于人的成长是有利好的。
2. 可以培养同学间的友谊,收获更多的快乐。并且,使人学习如何与人交往和交流。
3. 可以更好地利用学校的资源,例如图书馆,食堂,健身馆。有良好学习氛围。
寄宿学校的弊端:
1. 寄宿生可能受到周围不良同学的影响,染上吸烟以及打游戏的恶习。
2. 寄宿生和父母的感情可能会疏远。
薛鹏原创语料库:
1. boarding school = school with accommodation n 寄宿学校
2. save the trouble of commuting between home and school v节省了从学校到家里的往返的麻烦
点评:同理写作远程教育,远程办公
3. ensure the continuity of academic study v保障了学习的连续性
4. are able to improve their independence via living on campus v通过住校提高独立性
5. train one’s sense of independence = foster one’s sense of independence v培养独立性
6. cultivate many skills such as tidying up room,doing the laundry v培养各种能力,例如整理房间,洗衣服
7. have more time to dive into various campus activities v参加校园活动
8. It is convenient to draw on various educational resources v利用各种教育资源
点评:draw on v 利用……
点评:本句同理写作课堂教育的利好
9. The choice of hostel accommodation, organized by the university, would enable you to mix with a lot of new people v结实新朋友(注意插入语使用)
10. enlarge one’s circle of friends v扩大交友圈
11. …… make it easier for you to make new social contacts: v结实好友
12. University accommodation often provides some form of catering facilities, students do not have to do their own shopping or cooking 学校提供餐饮,学生不必购物,做饭
点评:catering facilities n 餐饮
13. …… may be easily swayed by surroundings without sufficient supervision and guidance from their parents ,也许受到周围不良环境的影响。
14. It is wise send children to a school with commendations 送孩子们读寄宿学校是明智的。
15. The merits of encouraging students to study in schools with accommodation outweigh its possible drawbacks. 鼓励孩子们读寄宿学校,利大于弊。