一篇好的雅思作文不仅看作者的排篇布局的能力,还要看作者语言的表达能力。语言素材是需要积累的,下面
雅思写作语言素材积累:教育类
Many young people leave school with a negative attitude. What are the reasons? How can we encourage young people to study? 很多人毕业后对于学习态度消极,原因何在,如何鼓励年轻人学习?
薛鹏谋篇布局:
二段:原因展开:
1)快节奏的生活和繁重的工作压力是原因,很多人过于繁忙没有时间充电学习。
2)生活重心转移,人们不再追求学业成功,而是开始享受家庭生活,对于成家立业者来说,很多人认为照顾家庭和发展事业更加重要。
3)企业对于终生学习没有足够重视,这也是人们懒惰,疏远更新知识的根源。
三段:解决策略:
1)个人通过参加培训课程和不断自修来培养学习兴趣很重要。
2)企业应该给员工提供学习的机会,奖励有更高的学历的员工。
3)媒体应该宣传学习的标杆,同时,提倡自我进步和创造良好的学习氛围很重要。(理想化写作)
薛鹏原创语料库:
1. ever-accelerating pace of modern life n 快节奏的生活
2. heavy workload n 繁重的工作负荷
3. are too occupied to spend time in updating their knowledge. 太忙碌,没有时间充电学习
4. The core of life has shifted from pursuing academic triumph to enjoying family life. 生活中心改变,从追求学业到享受家庭生活。
5. get married and started career 成家立业
6. take good care of family members and focus on work 照顾家庭,专注于工作:
7. some relevant enterprises’ less emphasis on lifelong learning 企业不重视终生学习
8. to cultivate his or her study interest via partaking of training programs or self-study. 参加培训和自学培养学习兴趣
9. provide their staff with more study opportunities v 提供工作学习的机会:
10. Mass media could publicize those who set fine examples for lifelong learning. 媒体宣传,树立学习的标杆。