一篇好的雅思作文不仅看作者的排篇布局的能力，还要看作者语言的表达能力。语言素材是需要积累的，下面
雅思写作语言素材积累：科技类
In most countries with the widespread of the use of the Internet people have more freedom to choose to work and study at home instead of traveling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 很多人可以远程办公或者接受远程教育，是否利大于弊?
点评：网络教育以及远程办公的利弊：
薛鹏谋篇布局：
二段：让步段：远程办公和教育的利好：
1)远程教育和办公的利好;克服地理的障碍，节省了时间成本和往返的麻烦。
2)提高了工作学习的灵活性，因此，适应特殊的学习群体例如，生病的职员以及忙碌的企业家。
三段：反驳段：远程教育和办公的弊端：
1)远程办公和教育是个人的经验成长，使人变得孤独，自闭，社交方面力不从心。
2)远程办公和学习者容易失去工作学习的热情，变得懈怠和懒散，因为很好的竞争环境，这种环境只能由课堂和办公室来营造。
3)健康角度，久坐电脑前，懒惰，肥胖以及实力下降不可避免。
薛鹏原创语料库：
1. tele-working = telecommuting n 远程办公
2. working at home = working from home n 远程办公
3. working as telecommuters 作为远程办公者
4. surmount the geographical barriers v克服地域障碍(最精彩表达)
5. enhance the flexibility of working v 提高工作的灵活性
6. save the trouble of commuting between homes and offices v节省在家里和办公室往返的麻烦(写作飞机汽车的利好)
7. sb tend to become socially inadequate 人会变得社交方面力不从心(重点背诵;科技的影响;谈及小组学习的弊端;谈及男女分校的弊端)
8. ……might generate eccentric character 产生古怪的性格(写作亮点;个体经验的弊端)
9. Employees working at home have more flexible time at their disposal, and therefore, they may find a perfect time to start and finish their work. 远程办公工作时间灵活，可以找到完美的时间结束和开始工作。
10. By doing so, workers will enjoy their jobs and boost their efficiency accordingly. 工作者会热爱自己的工作进而提高工作效率
11. There will be no such concern as work-life balance because work has integrated with life. 工作和家庭生活完美结合(支持远程办公，对于领导类的职业女性)
12. Tele-working will stifle team spirit and minimize the opportunities of brain storming 扼杀团队精神，失去头脑风暴的机会(简洁写作;写作小组学习的弊端)
13. choose a more flexible way of work 选择灵活的工作方式。
14. Tele-commuting could enhance the efficiency of working, for it effectively surmounts the geographical barrier and enhances the flexibility of work. 远程办公提高工作效率，因为它克服了地理的障碍以及提高了工作的灵活性。
15. exert a baneful impact on施加了不良影响(万能反驳;亮点表达)
16. …… is physically detrimental 有害身体健康(重点背诵;写作亮点)
17. Telecommuting is most likely to generate absenteeism and slack in working远程办公可能会导致怠工和工作上的懒散(重点背诵;具体谈及远程办公的弊端)
18. The constraints in offices and peer pressure can motivate the employees to work harder办公室的限制和来自同事的压力能刺激员工更加努力地工作(对比写作办公室办公利好)
19. As for employees, they no longer take the trouble to commute between their homes and offices every day. 对于员工来说，他们不再用费力地每天在家和办公室之间往返了(写作远程教育)