一篇好的雅思作文不仅看作者的排篇布局的能力，还要看作者语言的表达能力。语言素材是需要积累的，下面
雅思写作语言素材积累：抽象类
Some people think success in life is based on hard work and determination but others think there are more important factors like money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 有人认为成功来自勤奋和决定，有人认为成功来自美貌和金钱，讨论两种观点?
点评：成功 = 幸福
点评：成功的含义：拥有财富;社会地位：个人名誉：
薛鹏谋篇布局：
作家观点：努力带来成功：勤能补拙;天道酬勤。
正方观点：成功来自努力和决心：例证展开。
反方观点：财富和美貌可以使人成功(影视明星)家庭有财富助人成功(富二代，官二代);但是，昙花一现：
薛鹏原创语料库：
1 rely on honest hard work 诚实努力带来成功
2 the avenue to success n 成功的途径
3 Industry redeems stupidity n 勤能补拙
4 work far into the night v 工作到深夜
5 stand out from the rest v 出类拔萃