雅思写作题目:
Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?
雅思写作范文模板:
Today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily influenced by the genetic sciences. We now understand the importance of inherited characteristics more than ever before. Yet we are still unable to decide whether an individual’s personality and development are more influenced by genetic factors(nature) or by the environment (nurture).
Research, relating to identical twins, has highlighted how significant inherited characteristics can be for an individual’s life. But whether these characteristics are able to develop within the personality of an individual surely depends on whether the circumstances allow such a development. It seems that the experiences we have in life are so unpredictable and so powerful, that they can boost or over-ride other influences, and there seems to be plenty of research findings to confirm this.
My own view is that there is no one major influence in a person’s life. Instead,the traits we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences that we encounter in life are constantly interacting. It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person’s personality and dictates how that personality develops. If this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behavior and character of a person from the moment they were born.
In conclusion, I do not think that either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both nave powerful effects. How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person’s life.
再谈解题
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第一个单词 research,注意这个地方没有说是哪个领域的research,科学研究领域很广,可以是生理的也可以是心理或是其他的,所以先扩下思路再继续读题。
第二个单词 indicate,为什么用这个单词而不用prove或者其他的。哥的理解是既用然indicate,那就带有一些猜想性的成分。即研究的某些依据剑指后面要说的这个事情,但是研究结果目前并未直接指出。有人问,为什么要思考这个单词的用意?既然这个结果不是绝对的,那后面要说的观点一定有漏洞可以找!有漏洞可以反驳!不要读着读着直接掉坑里面然后不得不一边倒了。
第三个词组 characteristics we are born with. 这个到底指的是什么?有人说就是生下来就有的特点!对,然后呢?生下来就自信自强自发进取啦?特点特点,好好想想。这个地方,哥认为可以是genetic characteristics, 比如你身高,肤色,眼睛大小。心理特点貌似也可以说吧,但是哥怎么觉得那么勉强呢,哥更宁愿想的是出生10天内的有的特点。大家自己把握把握整体词组的意思。
第四个词组 much more influence. 首先是个比较级,看清楚谁比谁。不是哥啰嗦,有童鞋在慌乱的情况下把谁比谁都弄反了,你说我还能说点什么!?其次,influence 是干嘛的?influence有快有慢,总之是个运动变化的过程,而不是直接决定什么。好好想想哥这句话的意思。
第五个词组Personality and development。有人说完全没写的,这两个词好抽象直接说明这篇文章写不了多少词。哎,我猜下,如果有人问你,你的personality是什么,你什么都说不出来,哥不怪你。如果有人问你,你这十几年或者几十年都有什么长进(development),你说没有。哥不怪你。那也希望你不要怪考官不给你你想要的分数!
第六个词组 any experiences we may have in our life. 都说了any 了,意思就是说只要有关系的都可以,没有最好的experience 也没有最坏的experience,关键是和题目有没有关系!
第七个单词,major,major在这个题目里面不是only 不是the best, 不一定是 the mostimportant,同义词转换的时候要小心啊,别什么都不看稀里哗啦的甩一堆上去,小心把自己的作文甩偏题。
最后一个单词,we,哥求你想想,世界上有多少种人,有多少个年龄段,不是所有的人都和你一样的。题目说的那个研究显示的结果到底放谁身上是真,放谁身上是假?好好想想,想通了,你也可以站在一个有理有据的中立方,然后文思泉涌。