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Task 1 diagram
The diagram describes the production of canned fruit.
分析：本月第三场考试，加试题目为流程图，步骤非常多，但不难理解，描述的是如何去制作罐头水果。感谢热心网友和同事提供的流程图。该图画的也不知道什么鬼，看起来像小苹果，那我们假装它就是apple好了：)
syrup: noun[U] a sweet liquid made from sugar and water, oftenused in cans of fruit 糖水罐头水果常用：pears in syrup糖水梨
有些同学说这个单词我也不认识，那希望大家以后遇到生词都能去查一下，其实星巴克的纸杯上就有哦。比如London Fog(拿铁)里，加了vanilla syrup
sterlise:verb[often passive] to kill the bacteria in sth给… 灭菌，给…消毒 to sterlise surgical instruments 给外壳手术器械消毒sterlised milk/water
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Sample Answer
Thediagram illustrates how to produce canned fruit step bystep.
It is clear thatthere are several main steps in this process, from the initial freshapples to the final canned products.
At the first stage of thisprocess,sweet and ripe apples are chosen and transportedto the factory where apples are sorted by workers. Next, whilesome unsuitable apples are taken out at this stage, those qualified apples arecooled in a storageat 20℃. Following this, the cooledapples are sanitized under flowing water and weighed to ensure each apple to meetthe standard.
After being peeledand divided into pieces, the apples are mixed with water, juice and syrup toimprove the flavour. Then, themixture is filled in the can and sterilized in the cooking stage. Finally, after the cooling step, thepackaged cans are transported to local supermarkets and they are ready forsale.
task2
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环境保护和破坏 |
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A/D |
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Nowadays both scientists and tourists can go to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? |
分析：本文支持缺点大于优点这一观点。
缺点：1.去这些地方旅游会对原始环境造成破坏;2.一些国家可能会为了抢夺稀缺的资源，而发生冲突。
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Unknown natural is always brimming with seductive scenery. Plenty of researchers andtravelers make trips to distant natural places, such as the Mount Qomolangma,Antarctica and the North Pole. I am of the opinion that this has moredisadvantages than advantages.
Discover of new areas always bring some irreparable destruction. Before the South Pole is in the sight ofpublic, it was once an uncharted territory.Since its discovery, hundreds of explorers and scientists had taken adventuresto this wilderness. At the same time, their scientific expedition may leave some geographical environmentdestruction there. And it is quite troublesome to make up such destruction.
Although travelers extremely enjoy the breathtaking natural landscape, they bring along tremendous risks.One of the most common phenomenon of travelers is producing pollution to localareas. As reported in many cases, holidaymakers have left behind tons of wastein the Antarctica over the last century. This will not only threaten thesurvival of many creatures, including endangeredspecies such as penguins and seals, but also cause irreversible damage tothe ecosystem.
In addition, we cannot avoid the fact that untouched environments arescientifically proved to have considerable oil and gas reserves.Currently, theworld fuel supply is running out in the next fifty years, and no countries willhelp themselves from the temptation of these fuel sources. The greed of people will drive them to drain out the resource in these regions, and by then places likethe South Pole will be truly deserted.
In conclusion, I confirm that travelling to virgin land willbring far more losses than gains.