雅思写作高分秘诀:以题目为中心正确回答问题

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  小鹏哥雅思写作课:2015雅思写作备考策略及考情展望  

  雅思写作中,审题是解题的开始,也是关键点,决定整篇文章的命运。如果它问A,你答B,结果可想而知。因此,小鹏哥在讲到雅思写作高分的秘诀,将其放在第一位。在雅思写作中,我们一定要将以题目为中心,明确回答问题,清晰论证问题。

  题目为中心:明确回答问题,清晰论证问题

  以题目为中心就是要明确回答问题和充分论证问题:

  (1)明确回答问题:即你的论证须涵盖题目的所有要求,文章立场要力求清晰。

  (2)充分论证问题:要用例证法,反证法,再解释等写作手段去支持主题论点或者反驳不支持的观点。在近期的雅思作文中,题目总越来越多的要求用例证去支持观点,这就要求烤鸭有意识的分类整理各个写作话题的例证。

  雅思写作最参见的提问角度有四种:

  (1) what are its causes and what measures should be taken to solve it? (分析问题解决问题)

  (2) discuss both views and give your opinion ?(平衡两边写)

  (3)to what extent do you agree or disagree? (是否同意观点) .

  (4)discuss advantages and disadvantages(利弊讨论)

  案例1:

  题目

  •Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe consequence, some people think that only the government can solve the problems. To what extent do you agree or not?大城市的住房短缺可以引起严重的后果,有人说只有政府才能解决这个问题,是否同意?

  思考:是否只有政府才能解决住房短缺

  解析:该题目中有关键性的信息词only, 这个表示绝对性的词汇过于武断,很难令人信服,但是该观点又有其合理成分。综上分析,文章推荐首段尾句写作如下:

  As I see it, there is an element of truth in this opinion, yet it is not completely true. This essay aims to explore the roles that governments play in the process of resolving housing shortage and explore other means available.

  另外,烤鸭要留意的是论证的过程不可以偷换概念。

  案例2:

  例如:More working people are busy with work and have no time to spend with their families and friends. Why does this happen? What are the effects on family life and society as a whole? 人们忙于工作,没有时间和家人和朋友分分享,原因和何在,对于家庭和社会的影响?

  充分论证问题就是要用例证,反证,再解释等写作手段去支持主题论点或者反驳不支持的观点。

  例如:Today,more and more developing countries are expanding tourist industry. Why is the case? Do you regard as positive or negative? 现今,很多国家发展旅游业的原因,你认为有利还是有不弊?

  解析:分析该题目,推荐的写作思路是谈及发展旅游业的原因,在分别论证其利好和弊端,作者的观点应以支持为主,对于弊端可以提出建议的解决途径。

  现今,很多国家发展旅游业的原因,你认为有利还是有不弊?

  思考:

  哪些国家依赖旅游业的繁荣

  旅游业对于国家的利好有哪些

  发展旅游业的最显著的利好就是能够创造经济价值。南非就是很好的例子,过去的南非落后贫穷,旅游业的发展使得南非成为最有前景和惹眼的旅游地之一。当游客观光游览之时,会购物,就餐,住宿等,因此旅游业的繁荣刺激了国民经济,增加了税收。

  The most striking merit of boosting tourism is that it could generate immense economic value. South Africa could serve as a perfect example, which used to poverty-stricken and behind place. As tourism booms, it now becomes one of the most promising and eye-catching scenic spots. When tourists do their sightseeing, they will buy local souvenirs, dine in restaurants and seek accommodations, hence, the prosperity of tourism spurs national economy and multiplies tax revenue.

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