2016年9月4日GRE写作真题回顾及解析

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  Issue:

  1. The most effective way to understand contemporary culture is to analyze the trends of its youth.

  2. Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.

  3. Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.

  Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.

  4. Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.

  参考结构如下:

(+) Born and raised in contemporary world, it is the young people who are most deeply influenced by values of contemporary world.Young people are more open to new ideas, while the middle-aged or elderly people are slow in reaction or even  refuse to change. Pop culture In fact, almost every new fashion is led by young people, as can be seen from things they wear, programs they watch, language they use and even people they date Pop culture
(-) Young people's ideas are ususally not mature and will change over time,which makes their behaviors unpreditable and sometimes unreliable. young people keeps on changing their ideas Their ideas tend to be unstable and their bevaviors difficult to analyze young people keeps on changing their ideas
(-)It is the middle-aged or elderly people that take the most social resources and play the decisive role in a society. China Ideas of the youth are often seen as being inapppropriate or rebellious, imcompatible with the dominant trend of contemporary culture. So the voice of the young is either suppressed or assimulated into the mainstream thoughts. China

  Argument:

  1.The following appeared in a newsletter offering advice to investors.

  "Over 80 percent of the respondents to a recent survey indicated a desire to reduce their intake of foods containing fats and cholesterol, and today low-fat products abound in many food stores. Since many of the food products currently marketed by Old Dairy Industries are high in fat and cholesterol, the company's sales are likely to diminish greatly and company profits will no doubt decrease. We therefore advise Old Dairy stockholders to sell their shares, and other investors not to purchase stock in this company.”

  说得是关于销售高脂肪和高胆固醇食品的公司股东如何对待股票的问题。

  重点逻辑反驳点可以是:

  1. survey,关于证词类话题的讨论;

  2. intention vs action:关于人们是都真的会如同调查中所说的改变自己的消费习惯

  3. Old Dairy的innovation的问题:这家公司是不是已经有相关的市场策略。

  下面这道题目是我们今天要讲解的重点,这是一道相对来说有点难度的题目,也是一道必须要看writing instruction的难题。

  2. The president of Grove College has recommended that the college abandon its century-old tradition of all-female education and begin admitting men. Pointing to other all-female colleges that experienced an increase in applications after adopting coeducation, the president argues that coeducation would lead to a significant increase in applications and enrollment. However, the director of the alumnae association opposes the plan. Arguing that all-female education is essential to the very identity of the college, the director cites annual surveys of incoming students in which these students say that the school's all-female status was the primary reason they selected Grove. The director also points to a survey of Grove alumnae in which a majority of respondents strongly favored keeping the college all female.

  Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether therecommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.

  这个题目跟之前不一样的是,之前是要学生来评价一个论点,现在是在这个论证中,已经有人开始互相反驳了,那学生要做的,就是看要选边来站。这道题目,我们推荐加强recommendation,削弱opposition的方式在展开,会比较容易展开。

其它学校招收男生之后招生增多 G校招收男生之后招生也会增多 以前不允许男生进,所以男生就不申请,现在允许了,男生会申请,同时这也是一个很好的增加G校影响力的方案。 G校的影响力
将要来的学生普遍在调查中喜欢女校特质 女校特质受欢迎 那些申请了但是把G校拒掉的人以及根本不会申请G校的人,他们否定G校可能恰恰是不爽其女校特质;  调查更广阔的人; 
作为将要是这个学校的学生的人,很可能在调查中不好意思说学校的坏话 调查方式是不是匿名
校友调查中大部分回复者支持女校 校友喜欢女校 很多不care是不是女校的校友根本不会回复;  如何选择样本; 
调查的只是那些会在校庆日回到学校的校友,而这些人普遍是认可这种理念的;  回复率; 
很可能通常给学校赞助的校友并不支持;而且很多校友很可能就是因为不支持学校的路线而不赞助  一般给学校捐款的校友的倾向

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