雅思首段写作技巧,希望对各位考生的备考有所帮助,祝每位烤鸭考试顺利,都能取得好成绩!
一、首段写作技巧:反义引入法
结构:块——块——线
主语:
many individuals / some folks / most characters
谓语:claim/deem/believe/argue / hold the view that ….
But/ however/ while/ meanwhile/ on the contrary/in contrast…,
I disagree with / disregard this + point/ opinion / idea / point of view/ view….
——第二块(过渡)
Personally,
For my part,
As to me,
As far as I am concerned,
From my perspective,
I prefer A rather than B as my recommendation.
——线(总论点)
验证:
验证:
验证:
科技类:Computers——a blessing or a curse?
Some individuals argue that computers have so many disadvantages. On the contrary, I disagree with this point of view. As to me, I deem that the advantages of computers have overwhelmed its disadvantages.
阐释类:Smoking is increasingly serious? How to solve this problem?
Transform…
Writing Samples
块:①It seems certain that② many③ people have formed an unrealistic picture of ___, and they have been ④regarding __ as cure-all solution.
块:⑤However, I am always amazed when I hear people say so.
线:The information I have collected over the past several years makes me ⑥believe that nothing is further from the truth than ⑦is this opinion.
Optional
①: obvious \clear ; obviously \ apparently
②: most \ a large number of \
the majority of \ the minority of ;
more than \no more than\ less than \ no less than;
a handful of \ an increasing number of + N.
③: woman\man;female\male
Teenager \ college students \ undergraduate students
children\ adults\ senior citizens
④: consider …as
⑤: on the contrary \ by contrast
⑥: do not mistrust
⑦: than is this opinion= than this opinion is.
Practice:
Traditional clothes
Do parents are the best teachers?
Can money buy happiness?
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二、 首段写作技巧:对立表达法
结构:块——块——线
主语:
Many individuals claim /deem/believe/contend /argue that…..+观点A
转折词:
But/however/while/meanwhile/in contrast/on the contrary… +, others claim /deem /believe / contend /argue that…..+观点B
——块1
Which kind of view/opinion/idea/point of view/point is right? People’s opinions are controversial.
——块2(过渡句)
观点A:
主语1+does/do have so many brilliant advantages.
观点B:
主语2+ is better than主语1.
总论点:
the advantages/disadvantages of +主语1/主语2 + have outweighed + that of 主语2/ 主语1.
(its + advantages/ disadvantages.)
平衡式总论点:
both sides have something reasonable.
study at home or study abroad?
Many individuals claim that study at home does have so many brilliant advantages. While others believe that study abroad is superior to study at home. Which kind of view is right? People’s opinions are divided. From my perspective, I deem that the benefits of study abroad have outweighed that of study at home.
或者:both sides have something reasonable.
Transform…
对比引入
Never has the topic respecting whether college students should take part-time jobs on campus or not been defined. Although some people do strongly believe that doing so will distract them from study, taking all factors into consideration, I contend that taking part-time jobs does make contribution to changing the campus life into a colorful journey.(the earth into a paradise.)
Practice
Internet——a blessing or a curse?
Which play a major role in one’s personality and development? Nature or nurture?
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三,首段写作技巧:描述法
结构:块、块、线
Have you ever found/believed/felt/seen that…?
Have you ever found/believed/felt/seen that…?
Have you ever found/believed/felt/seen that…?
If you have the experience above mentioned,
You may agree with my opinion/ view/ idea/ point/ point of view that + 总论点
Sample: study at home or study abroad
Have you ever found that people who study abroad are more independent? Have you ever felt that people who study abroad own the wide vision? Have you ever believed that people who study abroad could obtain a better career? If you have the experience above mentioned, You may agree with my point that study abroad is the best choice for your brilliant future.
结构上:点、块、线
In summary, / In short, / In a word, / In conclusion,
To sum up, / To conclude,
As far as I am concerned,
——点
____do/did/does have so many brilliant advantages /so many disadvantages + in our daily life/ in our routine work.
——块
How can we say it is / they are / V+ing is + more troublesome/ more colorful?
——线(点题)
Body?
Reasons?
How?
…
Ways to find reasons…
P: public &politics
E: environment/ education/ experience/ economy
T: time & technology
C: culture & character
S: society
Sample
Part – time jobs:
¡ ——living expense;the sense of independence;enrich working experience; be well prepared to the future development;put theory into practice….
¡ ——distract… from study ;be a waste of time;lack of experience
Study abroad:
¡ ——education conditions; communication skills and interpersonal skills; rich social and life experience
¡ —— cost a lot; sentimental ; lack of self-care ability
Para. 2——原因分析段
¡ As far as I am concerned, running business attracts students for the following reasons:
----outline sentence
¡ To start with, it provided an important access to the information about the society;
----Reason 1
Para. 2——原因分析段
¡ Following this, it brings a lot of financial profit to the students who intend to support themselves or lessen the family burden;
----Reason 2
¡ Then, it may set the students off in their future work with the comparison between them and the ones without knowledge of business.
----Reason 3
¡ However, going for business, such as opening shops also involves many problems.
----outline sentence
¡ To begin with, opening shops usually requires such long hours of tedious work and it may well do harm to a student’s health and result in a waste of their time for academic study.
----Reason 1
Para. 2——原因分析段
¡ In addition, business is not a piece of cake and it needs sophisticated experiences and a cool head of tacking varied accidents as well as emergencies.
----Reason 2
¡ Next, sometimes various kinds of social problems like violence, corruption and dishonesty may even poison their unguided minds.
----Reason 3
¡ To support----
All these contribute to my point of view that part-time jobs do make contribution to paving the way of the future development for undergraduates.
¡ To against----
Compared with the benefits going in for business bring to the university students, the disadvantages far outweigh.
¡ In summary, whether to have a part-time job or not depends on such factors to which category the job belongs, what attitude one takes and how the situation goes on. If they take a good job as necessary training, such as private tour, machine operator in workshops or research assistant, it will benefit them. Otherwise, negative impacts will win an upper hand.
Panacea conclusion
Personally, I contend that both sides have something right/reasonable. ___ should be viewed as a two-edged sword, which presents us with both benefits and troubles. But we should not give up eating for fear of choking. The best policy, as I see it, is to maximize its advantages and minimize its disadvantages, so that they can benefit us in a better way.