戴云托福写作笔记

2022-05-21 18:59:37

  小编为了帮助广大的

  写作训练方法

  1-5篇 不限时写作 结构完整 300字以上

  6-10篇 1小时 350字以上 结构完整

  要求:检查语法、拼写错误 跑题、表达不清问题

  11-20篇 半小时 400字以上

  要求:检查语法、拼写错误 跑题、表达不清问题 润饰文章

  理由不能太具体 否则不容易展开 要擅于利用“万金由”

  各个理由的关系,必须是并列关系,排列顺序由段落长短来决定。

  开头1 背景+论题+各方观点的理由+作者论点和理由

  背景+论题+反方观点+(反方理由)+过渡+作者观点+作者理由

  开头段写理由的好处

  怎样写背景:

  提出一种普遍的或值得关注的现象(紧扣论题)作为背景

  从远到近,由大到小,谈论紧扣论题的社会观点作为背景

  官方、权威数据,调查研究结果

  开头2 事例+论题+各方观点(和理由)+作者理由和论点

  ⑴ 媒体(电视、电台、报纸、杂志和网络)的报道

  ⑵ 朋友、邻居、同事的故事

  开头3 问题+论题+各方观点(和理由)+作者论点和理由

  

  把背景用问题方式提出 连续提问(煽情式提问)

  开头4 “引语”+论题+各方观点(和理由)+作者论点和理由

  主题句

  必须是陈述句 必须表面观点 不要直接写事实 由观点到事实

  态度必须坚决 每段都要有主题句 通常位于段首或段末

  结尾

  总结全文(论点+各方观点)+重述论点和理由+提出建议/解决问题/深化意义

  把对方的优点移植到己方,把己方的观点消灭掉,提出实施方案和注意事项

  深化意义=展望未来+对国家社会的好处

  黄金规则一 –The longer, the better

  ⑴ 每一个论点都要有理由

  ⑵ 每一个理由都要有例子

  ⑶ 每一个例子都要有细节

  黄金规则二----------“万金由”

  黄金规则三 重述语意的技巧

  ⑴使用同义词进行替换

  ⑵使用同根词进行替换

  Oppose-opposition

  Build-building

  Announce-announcement

  Explain-explanation

  ⑶使用短语进行替换

  (Support) argue for/vote for/be in favor of

  (Oppose) argue against/vote against/object to/be opposed to

  ⑷使用全新的表达法进行替换

  A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near the community.

  ----------a large factory is supposed to built near the community according to the announcement issued by a company.

  Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.

  ------There is a growing awareness of both the positive and negative influences that the construction plan brings to our community.

  黄金规则四-黄金句型 priceless sentence patterns

  超酷超炫超难句型大比拼

  注意:主题句 尽可能2-1格式 细节提升

  每个段落开头

  1. 强调句(1-2)

  2. The more…,the more (1-2)

  The more frequently we communicate with family members, the more harmonious the relationship in the family between us is.(只要涉及交流都可以用)

  3. 倒装句(2-3)

  ①So…that….以至于

  So big is the classroom that it may hold ten thousand people.

  So fast does he run that the train couldn’t catch up with him.

  ② As…as(more…than…) 比较结构

  I run as fast as he did-----I run as fast as did he.

  ③表示地点、位置、范围、处所的状语或表语提前至句首

  My sister is among those students.----Among those students is my sister.

  ④分词或形容词短语提前至句首

  主语(+定语)+be+形容词/过去分词/不及物动词现在分词+介词+名词

  主语(+定语)+be+及物动词现在分词+n.

  E.g. Contrary to/coincident with the opinion of many people is my heartfelt (忠心的) objection to/agreement with the idea that students should study together with classmates.

  Those people/parents who hold the opinion that money is the only symbol of success are satisfied with/contented with/interested in/worried about/opposed to their children finding a high-paying and long-working job.------------Satisfied with/contented with/interested in/worried about/opposed to their children finding a high-paying and long-working job are those people/parents who hold the opinion that money is the only symbol of success

  Arguing for those students living outside the campus are those people who hold the opinion that independence is the most critical characteristic of a university student

  ⑤形容词+though/as+主语+谓语+主句

  Rich though he is, he is unhappy.

  Though the advantages (that owning a business enjoys/leads to/results in) are considerable/wonderful/numerous, they can not compete with the benefits (that working for others brings about/causes), when/if responsibility is taken into consideration/deliberation/account.

  Though the advantages that living in outside the campus enjoys are considerable, they can not compete with the benefits that living in inside the campus brings about, when safety is taken into consideration.(通常用在第一段的最后一句话提出文章论点和理由,2-1文章的承上启下部分或文章的结尾) ---------------------------- considerable though the advantages that living in outside the campus enjoys are, they can not compete with the benefits that living in inside the campus brings about, when safety is taken into consideration.

  ⑥表示否定的副词或短语+助动词+主语+谓语+其他成分

  No/not/never/Neither/nor/ (全部否定)

  seldom/rarely/barely/scarcely/hardly(部分否定)

  Never will I form an idea that bicycles affect human beings’ life style most profoundly among all transportation means.

  ⑦Only+状语置于句首+助动词+主语+谓语+其他成分

  Only though this crisis do I understand that you love me best in the world.

  3. 比较结构和倍数关系(1-2)

  As…as…

  A is five times as big as B

  A is five times bigger than B

  A is five times the size of B.

  4. 修辞问句(1-2)

  When human beings enjoy their happy life, isn’t it necessary that they give some consideration to those cute animals without enough playing ground?

  When those people enjoy their happy life outside campus, isn’t it necessary that they give some consideration to the great opportunities with their classmates if they live inside campus?

  When those people enjoy convenience brought by automobiles, isn’t it necessary that they give some consideration to the heavily polluted air and those people who are injured severely (had) in the car accidents?

  When people enjoy the convenience brought the construction plan, isn’t it necessary that they give some consideration to the heavily polluted air and those people who are injured severely or die in the car accident because of the traffic jam after the construction of the factory?

  以上就是小编为了帮助广大的托福考生们能够进行高效的备考,特整理了这篇文章,预祝广大托福考生都能取得胜利!


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