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A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.
是否同意低薪假期多的工作比高薪假期少的工作好?
思路拓展 :
1. 工作是生活的重要部分,因此是幸福的源泉,很多人将自己的成就感和薪水的高低联系到一起。薪水高意味企业重视自己,因此,获得职业成就感和自豪感的机会就多。
2. 尽管可能休闲的时间减少,但是,高薪可以给家人带来更加幸福的生活。具体而言,改善居住环境,子女接受精英教育,家人的医疗有保障,这些是幸福的源泉。
3. 工作着是美丽的,因为人不是怕忙,而是怕闲下来,工作通过有建设地利用了时间,使人心满意足,再也没有无聊之感。因此,世界上即使是最枯燥的工作,也比无所事事要强。
托福考试作文范文参考:
首段:个性开篇 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场
Indeed, the proportion of people’s life spent doing such jobs is very high. So feelings about one's job must mirror how an individual feels about his or her life, thus, job satisfaction is very significant for people’s happiness. One of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting jobs. People differ greatly in their views as to which job is more commendable, a job with less vacation time but comfortable salary, or a career with more flexible time but low pay. As I see it, both of them all have its pros and cons, yet, a job with comfortable salary deserve more praises.
点评:…… deserve more praises 值得更多的赞美
二段:第一次支持作家立场以及细节展开
For a start,a trend is that nowadays a great many people are often willing sacrifice freedom for the purpose of having a well-paid salary. More precisely, many people associate job satisfaction with the number on their pay cheque. They may take their salary as a symbol of how much they are valued by the organizations they work for and how excellent their performance is. Little wonder that a poll taken by China Daily found that most people believed that they could enjoy superior material comfort as well as creating good quality of life if they can take up handsomely paid jobs.
点评:take up = embark on 从事……
三段:第一次支持作家立场以及细节展开:叔叔保罗创业的故事
The debate reminds me of my Uncle Paul, who is an entrepreneur by embarking on self-employment. A decade ago, my uncle had a stable career, namely, a civil servant, more freedom and meager salary is the feature of his career. However, his life always felt empty and he was fed up with his former job. After careful consideration, my uncle hardened his heart to carve out his own career, currently, he lives his life to the full, he always get his hands full and have limited free time at his own disposal. However, the sense of happiness and fulfillment gradually grows on him. All these happened to prove a fact that a well-paid job is superior to a career which has a meager salary.
点评:His life feels empty 他感到生活很空虚。