2015年9月5日范文与真题对比。相信同学们都知道什么是
2015年9月5日托福写作机经范文：
In order to attract more tourists, government should improve the safety by hiring more police or improve the appearance by improving the old buildings and streets.
Nowadays, for the economic development of a city, the government place undue emphasis on how to boost its tourism industry. While some experts show their enthusiasm on selling their cities to outside tourists by publicizing good social security via recruiting more police, I hold a different opinion. From my perspective, improving old buildings and streets is a better alternative.
Admittedly, hiring more police might be useful in attracting tourists. When government is focusing on recruiting more policemen, these new recruiters would be helpful in improving social security standards. Thanks to the improved standards, more visitors might be relieved about the city when paying a visit to the city; hence the the city reputation would be enhanced. However, on balance, only focusing on police while not improving building places of interest is not enough. Without places about culture or places for amusement parks, visitors still would not come even if social security is good. To attract more visitors, a more effective way would be to improve olds buildings.
To begin with, improving old buildings helps preserve old cultures. In other words, more visitors would love to visit places with cultural value so the maintenance of old buildings is attractive to them. For example, when Beijing government begins to repair the Great Wall, the symbol of diligence of ancient Chinese people, the experts pay great attention on building the wrecked walls and restoring some stone relics. Meanwhile, they reshape some broken bricks for the steps so that visitors could step onto the Great Wall. As a result, an increasing number of visitors from foreign countries come to Beijing to watch the marvelous Great Wall building on top of piles of mountains. On the contrary, if hiring more police, though government would gain reputation for their good management in social security, it would not add to any cultural attraction.
In addition, improving the streets makes it convenient for tourists. That's is to say, tourists would love to visit places with convenient facilities. According to a survey conducted on Sina Weibo, after polling hundreds of tourists from the National Holiday, a significant percentage of them claim that when deciding a place as their touring destination, they are more likely to choose a city with broader streets. In their minds, when the city is built with convenient streets and beautiful auxiliary facilities, this urban planning would give tourists a sense of modernism and make them feel go into colorful metropolitan life. With these perfect streets, public transport would be convenient for them to visit both in city and around city.
To sum up, due to the reasons I lost above, I would regard that by perfecting streets and maintaining old buildings, government would be more likely to attract tourists to visit the city.
2015年9月5日
If a city government wishes to attract more tourists, it can either improve its safty by hiring more police or improving its appearance by improving old buildings and streets. According to your opinion, which one is better?
如果一个城市想吸引游客，是通过雇佣更多的警察改善安保好呢?还是修缮街道和老建筑改善形象好呢?
题型：二选一
话题：政府投资、旅游
思路：具体情况具体分析
这种题目其实很变态，两个方面其实都很重要，但是到底哪个更重要就要看具体的情况了，比如前段时间土耳其很混乱、希腊被经济危机折腾的也不太安宁，这种情况下，毫无疑问安保首先得到位，如果连基本的人身安全都得不到保证了，那估计连本地的老百姓都要拼死命的往欧洲跑了，那还谈啥吸引游客。
但是除了上述情况之外，可能改善市容市貌应该更重要一些吧。毕竟大部分的地区游客的安全还是可以得到保证的，比如法国和意大利可能小偷确实不少，但是这个问题其实并不是特别严重，这种情况下可以拿出更多的钱来修缮著名景点，达到吸引游客的目的。(具体展开素材请阅读第二个图文)
Improving security is, without any doubt, of first-rate importance in order to boost a city’s appeal to potential tourists, particularly when it comes to those places whose citizens are exposed to a turbulent political environment or even afflicted by terrorist attacks.
Yet for most of other tourist sites with relatively low crime rate and peaceful political environment, safety improvement pales into insignificance when set against the huge benefits brought by refurbishing old buildings with historical value which, many of us believe, might serve as a huge magnet for tourists.
2015年9月5日托福写作真题解析(综合写作)
阅读部分：
关于如何解读 animal play 这种 phenomenon 提出了三种假设
surplus energy theory 为了消耗不能储存的身体能量
instinctual-physic theory 动物的 brain 已经 preprogram 一些生存技能，这些技能是instinct, 但是他们需要把这些技能练熟所以进行animal play。
social functions theory ： animal play 是为了动物能加 enhance bonds with group members
听力部分：
举了一个例子，baby seals 一整天都不会出去觅食，而是 wait for their mothers to carry back food and feed them, 不会有 surplus energy，但是他们也会进行animal play这种行为 (这个明显是在找反例)
科学家进行进行了一项实验，将小猫分成两组，one group play，另外一个不play，她们长大后play那一组的hunting skill 并不比另一组强 (教授也是不嫌累，还搞了个对比实验)
研究表明，rats 小时候play，但是 grow older 仍然play，成年老鼠是不需要学习这些social ability的 (这个其实也是举反例，而且实际上还来个分情况讨论)
2015年9月5日托福写作机经范文与真题的对比就是这样了，同学们有没有学到一些知识点呢?如果有不明白的问题可以咨询