新托福独立写作题目(学生越来越不尊重老师)

2022-05-22 03:50:32

        本文是小编整理的一篇新

  题目

  A/D: students do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past.

  写作思路

  同意:1.学习方法多样化了,学生对老师的依赖减少;2.社会过度强调学生自主性,课堂纪律和约束减少;3.传统的尊师道德没有被很好的传承。

  Key sentences:

  1.Students are less reliant on teachers because of the various ways to acquire knowledge.

  2. As the whole society overemphasizes students’free development, strict disciplines and regulations at class have paled.

  3.Respecting teachers, a kind of traditional moral standard, has not been inherited well by the young generation.

  key words & phrase

  nip sth in the bud, in the wake of , knock-on effect, has huge implications on, born fruit, make light work of sth

  新

  Education plays a pivotal role in almost every step of a person’s growth and development, whether it is talking about the acquisition of essential knowledge and skills, or about the establishment of values and the molding of personalities. However, with the rapid development of technologies, the population of electronic ways of education seems to be diminishing the importance of real teachers and thus it is assumed that compared to students in the past, young people today show less respect to teachers. But as I see it, technology can never take the place of real human interaction, especially in the realm of education. Even in the contemporary age, the respect people pay to their teachers is just as much as, if not more than, they did in the past. (128)

  【开头段】先简要阐述教育的重要性,而后引出作文话题,最后表明个人观点。

  译文:教育在一个人发展成长的每一个阶段都至关重要,无论是说到知识和技能的习得还是说到价值观的树立和人格的塑造。然而,随着技术的飞速发展,电子的教育方式的普及似乎正在削弱老师的重要性。因此有人提出,与过去的学生相比,今天的年轻人不再那么尊重老师了。但在我看来,技术永远取代不了真实的人类互动,特别是在教育领域。即使在当今时代,人们对老师的敬重之心与过去相比,即便没有增加也是丝毫未减。

  Indeed, the effectiveness and convenience of what technology has done in educating people today cannot be underestimated. Take a look at people around us, technologies provide unprecedented opportunities for them to get education on a daily basis. Young children are practicing their basic skills like counting and alphabet through interesting games on their tablets. College students are searching useful information and data for their papers through electronic archives. Working adults manage to juggle their jobs and further education, thanks to the convenience offered by online courses. All these commonplace scenarios may lead to a presumptuous conclusion that we do not need teachers any more. To me, however, this judgement is untenable, because it fails to take into account the essential role of education, which could only be undertaken by human teachers. (131)

  【让步段】承认慈善的作用,从个人社会两方面论述。然后反驳题目中的表述。

  译文:诚然,科技为教育带来的便利不容小觑。环顾四周,每一天,技术都为人们提供着前所未有的教育机会。年幼的孩子们用他们的平板电脑上的趣味游戏练习着基础技能比如计数和字母表。大学生们通过电子档案库为他们的论文搜索着有用的数据和资料。工作的人终于可以边工作便接受继续教育,多亏有了方便的网络课程。这一切日常的情景可能导致了一个武断的结论,即我们不再需要老师了。然而,在我看来,这一判断是站不住脚的,因为它没能考虑到教育的本质任务只能由老师来承担。

  In the first place, students still respect their teachers no less than they did in the past, because it is their teachers who impart knowledge most effectively to them. No technology is substitute for a well-experienced and loving teacher in the transmission of human knowledge and the cultivation of good learning habits. By clarifying abstract and abstruse concepts in a lively classroom atmosphere or devoting extra time to instruct students on a one-on-one basis, professionally well-trained teachers can not only help students better comprehend the knowledge, but also direct them to explore and interpret the meaning of things actively. For example, my high-school physical teacher Mr. Wu is one of the most inspiring teachers I have ever met. He not only gives us interesting and thought-provoking lectures but also takes us to field trips, kindling our curiosity to explore the world around us. Miss Ma, our English teacher, is very patient in helping us form good learning habits and effective methods of practicing a language. I benefit from my teachers in numerous ways and this is why I respect them as much as I could. On the contrary, if I only depend on educational Apps to study these subjects without the guidance of my teachers, I may quickly lose my direction in the massive sea of knowledge. (217)

  【主体理由1段】 老师可以最有效地传递知识。(安吉拉教育素材第一单元)

  译文:首先,学生们依然一如既往地尊重他们的老师,因为是老师们有效地传递知识给他们。在传播人类知识和培养良好的学习习惯方面,没有一项技术可以取代富有经验和爱心的老师。通过在一个气氛活跃的课堂讲解抽象深奥的概念,或是在课下花时间当面引导学生,受过良好专业训练的教师不仅可以帮助学生更好地理解知识,而且引导他们主动地探索和解释事物的意义。比如,我的高中物理老师吴老师就是我所遇见的最能启发学生的老师之一。他不仅上课风趣而深刻,而且经常带我们去实地考察,点燃我们探索周围世界的好奇心。英语老师马老师则非常耐心地培养我们良好的学习语言的习惯和有效的方法。我从我的老师们身上受益匪浅,这也是我极其敬重他们的原因。相反的,如果我仅依靠学习软件来学习这些科目而没有老师的指引,我可能很快就在浩瀚的知识海洋中迷失了方向。

  Moreover, how could we stop respecting our teachers when it comes to the help they give us in shaping our characters? Teachers of noble character and high prestige also play a pivotal part in instilling moral values into students and prepare them to be responsible community members. Compared to indifferent technologies, teachers relate to students in a more human way. They can not only cultivate positive social behaviors and correct hurtful actions, but also set a role model and exert a subtle influence on the formation of students’ personalities and characters through their own words and acts. In this way, they can increase students’ awareness of moral standards and prepare young individuals into well-behaved and law-abiding citizens. As society is getting more complex, the challenge facing us is also becoming more and more complicated. Therefore, the role of education has changed. In the past decades, it was only to teach students essential knowledge and skills, but now it is to teach students how to understand the values of the society and give them a right direction to follow, so as to protect them from losing the purpose in the turbulent sea of social life. Therefore, teachers are still worthy of their students’ respect, for what they have done in helping their students form a well-rounded value system and prepare them for future success. (224 words)

  【主体理由2段】 老师还可以灌输道德。(安吉拉教育素材第一单元)

  译文: 此外,当说到老师在人格塑造方面给我们的帮助,我们又怎么能停止尊重他们呢?德高望重的老师在将道德标准灌输给学生并将他们培养成好的公民方面发挥着至关重要的作用。与冷冰冰的科技相比,老师以一种更为人性化的方式与学生交流。他们不仅可以抑恶扬善,培养好的社会行为,而且可以树立典范,言传身教地影响学生。如此就提高了学生的道德修养,使其成为遵纪守法、有责任心的社会公民。随着社会变得日益复杂,我们面临的挑战也变得越来越复杂。因此,教育的功能发生了改变。在过去,就是只需要教学生必要的知识,而现在则是教会他们理解社会的基本价值观并给他们一个正确的方向,好让他们不会在激荡的社会海洋中失去方向。从这个意义出发,老师们仍然值得他们学生尊重,因为他们帮助学生建立起成熟的价值体系,为他们将来的成功打下良好基础。

  Taking into account all of the foregoing discussions, now I could safely reach my conclusion: while it is true that technologies are playing a more and more significant role in educating people, the importance of teachers is not to be diminished, not only because we get the knowledge mainly from them, but also because we see them as a role model in our moral development. (65words)

  【结论段】综上所述,我可以有把握地得出结论:虽然科技在教育中发挥着越来越重要的作用,老师的重要性仍未削减,不仅因为我们主要从老是那里获取知识,而且因为我们视他们为我们的道德楷模。

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