雅思真题:2014年3月15日雅思写作解析

2022-06-14 22:31:09

  Task 1 分析

  考题:柱状图

  * 单位为%

  * 数据仅供参考

  考情分析和预测:

  本年度第一次的柱状图,之前都是以线状、表格交替出现,加上两次流程图。3月剩余的小作文,应该还会继续出现柱状图或者出现饼状图。

  得分要点:

  本题其实是现线状图写法,分别写出3条线的变化即可。细节可以分成上升下降类分别展开。

  范文展示:(仅供参考)

  The bar chart gives information about the share of total world production in Asia, Europe and the rest of the world respectively during period between 1880 and 2000.

  In general, it is notable that the total production in Europe and the rest of the world experienced the similar situation by declining after a time of boosting while the tendency in Asia was just the opposite.

  More specifically, when it comes to Europe, the production turned out to be almost 40% of the total amount in the year of 1840, after which, it reached a peak at 45% with in 40 years, lingering around for the next 4 decades, before it finally lost its momentum, ending at less than 30% of the whole world’ in 2000. Similarly, the percentage of the production in the rest of the world was far less then the other two, followed by a long-lasting increasing trend till it tipped almost 40% in 1960, where it began to go downwards.

  In terms of Asia, the year of 1840 witnessed the greatest proportion of production (more than 50%). However, a sharp decrease by 30% was reported during the following decades till it bottomed at 20% in 1960, before it rebound to 40% in 2002.

  Task 2 分析

  考题:

  It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces like squares and parks, do you agree or disagree?

  考情分析:

  关于社会空间的话题。社会类话题仔2013每个月都会涉及1-2题,2014延续了这种特征,到目前为止,社会话题1月出现1次,关于年轻人跳槽;2月出现2次,关于贫富差距和成功的标准;3月到目前为止出现2次,关于大城市生活,今天出现了关于是否增加社会公共空间的题目。关于社会类,特别是社会新现象的话题,在本年度将会不断出现。

  审题要点:

  第一个问题,抓住题干关键词 Large Public Space, 围绕它展开讨论。最好能集中在Large上更为切题,因为饭店等其他不怎么Large的地方也属于公共一部分。

  思路分析:(仅供参考)

  建议写法:基本同意

  开头:简单引入话题

  第二段:社会大公共空间带来很多好处。

  WHY: 因为现在人生活的空间越来越小,和大自然接触的机会越来越少。

  WHAT:

  1、对普通个人:有很多休闲/交朋友/运动等的地方(老人,小孩,上班族)

  2、对当地政府:是标志性建筑,可以提升城市形象和知名度。比如......

  3、对经济:可以促成某些广场经济的发展。

  第三段:HOWEVER:

  缺点可以从社会治安、环境保护、政府压力等来展开。

  结尾:总之是好的政策。

  范文展示:(仅供参考)

  “claustrophobia ” is recently a word that is no stranger to the people living in big cities, which describes a newly found psychological disease. People who have “claustrophobia” usually find it depressed and unbearable to stay in a confined place for a long time due to different reasons. However, the problem is that most of us do have to stay indoor(office, workshop, classroom, etc.) for the most of the time of the life. Therefore, it is of great necessity to welcome more large public places like parks and squares where the citizens can get close to the nature and get rid of the pressure in working or studying time.

  The large public spaces, first and foremost, provide a regular way for the local people to do things of all kinds more than their work. Sporting like jogging or playing badminton, which cannot usually be realized indoor, will certainly become one of the best choice for the young and old in spare time to get refreshed after a whole day’s heavy workload. Additionally, parks with plants are also somewhere for people to have a bite to eat during the break while they are busy, probably meeting someone interesting. Last but not the least, establishing as many as those large public places, the image of the city is will be laddered up for the garden is no doubt to be carefully attended. It should be always cherished for the city people to have more green plants.

  However, it does not mean those places are without any disadvantages. A recent case centered on the riot instigated by a gang of terrorists in the commercial street of Changsha, leading to several death. It is always those densely populated public places that become the target of terrorists.

  In conclusion, it is a great policy for governments to set up as many large public places as possible. Meanwhile, they should also make sure that the precaution work has already been done.

(编辑:suyan)

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