2016年12月17日托福写作真题答案及解析资料

2022-06-10 18:55:51

  2016年12月17日

  2016年12月17日

Topic 议题:whether solar road should be constructed in America
  Reading Listening
Sub-point 1
  分论点1
First, the road is flat not tilted, which means it cannot reflect much sunlight. There is experiment indicating that the flat surface in fact can absorb more energy. Because in cloudy days, the sunlight will be reflected to different directions, flat road can reflect more.
Sub-point2
  分论点2
Second, the glass used in constructing the solar road are easy to break, the broken pieces of which will jeopardize the car passing by. In addition, it will be very slippery in rain day. The problem can be solved by using a type of glass that is rough in surface and hard.
Sub-point 3
  分论点3
Third, solar road cost too much, so it is not worthwhile. In the long term, it is worth doing for the energy obtained from the solar road will be adequate for the country itself and may be sold some to other countries to get revenue which can be cover the original cost.

  Sample answer:

  The writer and the speaker have a debate on whether solar road should be constructed in America. The reading thinks it is not feasible, which are opposed by the following lecture.

  First, the writer claims that the road is flat not tilted, which means it cannot reflect much sunlight. While the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle, according to him, there is experiment indicating that the flat surface in fact can absorb more energy. Because in cloudy days, the sunlight will be reflected to different directions, flat road can reflect more.

  Second, the passage states that the glass used in constructing the solar road are easy to break, the broken pieces of which will jeopardize the car passing by. In addition, it will be very slippery in rain day. However, the speaker casts doubt on this opinion by saying that the problem can be solved by using a type of glass that is rough in surface and hard.

  Last, the writer argues that solar road cost too much, so it is not worthwhile. By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, this claim does not hold water. In the long term, it is worth doing for the energy obtained from the solar road will be adequate for the country itself and may be sold some to other countries to get revenue which can be cover the original cost.

  2016年12月17日托福独立写作:

作文题目: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Children should spend most of the time playing and studying, and they should not be required to do household chores, like cooking or cleaning.
题型类别: 学生是否应该做家务这个话题托福考过好多次了,应该做家务的角度很更好写,因为可以培养责任感,并且发展独立生存能力,然后再写一个让步段
写作指导:
   
Disagree:   
 责任感的培养。通过对家务的参与知道自己是家庭的一部分,他们有责任也有义务为家庭贡献一份自己的力量,他们并不能饭来张口。同时这也有助于孩子建立自我价值感,他们会觉得自己 在家中是有价值的。先认同了自我和自信,才能 更好的担起责任。 
 独立自主能力的培养。孩子们总有一天会离开父母,或是因为住校学习,或是因为异地工作等,这也意味着孩子应该从小就培养好自己照顾自己的能力。通过做家务,孩子可以学会煮饭,洗衣,打扫等,这样即使他们出国留学也能有很强的适应能力。 
 (让步段)有人会说做家务会占用孩子的学习时间。但是孩子已经在学校学习了一整天,也需要适当的放松,适当的家务活不仅可以是身体的放松和锻炼,也是心理的放松。

  Sample Answer:

  It is a quite strange phenomenon that some parents require students to spare no effort on their academic study, regardless of others fields like health, personalities and values. Contrary to their statement, I insist that children will be the beneficiaries if they are allowed to take part in household chores.

  Some basic living skills are needed for children’s future life. A cousin of mine, Peter, whose mom allowed him to do little, if any, housework in his childhood. Unfortunately, not until 30 did he know how to use the microwave oven. The number of children like my cousin are increasing in this time and age, thus causing the reasonable worry how they could live independently in future. Accordingly, the children would not need to learn the independence if their parents were to serve them for their whole lives.

  Aside from the independence, the sense of responsibilities is brought from doing household chores. As the member of family, it is of great necessity for children to help their parents with some basic work like cleaning the room or trim the garden. Under this circumstance children know how to contribute the whole family rather than care about themselves only. Besides, they also learn that they should wash their own dishes after the meal and cleaning the dirty if they break something inadvertently. After all, a house become a home only when children make it a place where they truly contribute.

  Undoubtedly, allowing children to do housework may lead to one or two downsides. For instance, some children may get hurt when they are doing some cooking or cleaning. However, as to the above-mentioned possibility, I suggest the parents to give the direction about how to do the job in right way and how to avoid injuries. They also need to look after their children when they are doing some dangerous work. Hence, there is nothing to be worried about.

  In conclusion, given the independence and responsibility, I totally disagree with that parents pay all attention to their studying and playing. Rather, household chores is another even more important “skills” that they need to take.

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