雅思真题:2014年6月19日雅思写作解析

2022-05-18 08:21:08

  Task 1 分析

  考题:线状图

  考情分析和预测:

  老题重现。类似的旅游目的的线状图,历年考试时常出现。

  线状图自1月以来,几乎每月都会出现,除了在3月和5月以外。不妨可以这样联想,出现流程地图的时候,相对简单地线状图就会退位。3月和5月是流程和地图集中出现的时候,其中3月首尾出现两次流程图,5月第一次和第三次分别出现流程和地图。而出现线图多的时候,表格也会相应出现,大多数都是动态趋势的表格。看来,今年考试小作文的规律很可能就是要么难得要死,要么简单得要死。

  得分要点:

  大凡线状图,都是要写出每一条线的趋势,明显的拐点等主要特征。另外,3条以上的线状图一定会有其中2条或2条以上要求学生写出其相似或区别。本图很清楚展示了HOLIDAY这条线单独性而下面两条的相似性更明显。因为写作时可以分为两大类。

  范文展示:(仅供参考)

  The line chart shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 to 2009.

  It is notably that people traveling to UK in holiday occupied a dominant place, compared with other two(for business and for visiting friends or relatives), which were over 6 million throughout the time. In detail, Starting at about 7 million in 1989, the visitors to UK then showed an exponential increase to an acme at 9 million in 1997, where it lost its momentum, dipping below a little, before it finally rebound to nearly 10 million in 2009.

  Meanwhile, business and friends-visiting trip to UK shared much in common with each other, ascending from 3 million and 5 million to 6 million and 8 million respectively, in this two decades, during which period, year of 1993 and 2003 welcomed the same number of people going for those two purposes.

  Task 2 分析

  考题:

  Some people think it is easier for adults to learn practical skills(such as computer skills) by themselves while others believe it is better to learn with a teacher in classroom.

  Discuss both sides and give your own opinion?

  考情分析:

  算是教育类的新内容,成人教育问题。说道教育类,也是2014年继社会类话题以来,每个月必考1次或以上的话题。下半年还会延续这样的规律出现。

  审题要点:

  关键词 一方面 practical skills 而不是其他比如历史,语文等等。因为需要围绕什么是practical skills写,除了computer skills, language skills, driving skills, cooking skills等也应该可以算在内。在行文的时候,有了这样的拓展,内容才会更加丰富。另一方面,从teacher/class 给成人带来的好处展开即可。结论可以是中立的,也可以倾向一边。

  思路分析:(仅供参考)

  建议写法:两种学习方法结合,大部分时间可以自学和生活中实践,而在开始的时候,可以老师引入,学习技巧。

  开头:简单引入话题

  第二段:成人自学的背景和优势

  WHY:

  1、生活繁忙,压力大,很少有时间和余力去上课和学习

  2、网上资源丰富,可以在零碎时间及时学习和积累。

  WHAT:

  1、节省大量的经历和时间。

  2、自学的过程可以给小孩做榜样,开发双方的潜力。

  第三段:HOWEVER:

  1、自学很容易造成误区和不解,在网上无法找到专业的回答。

  2、有了老师,学习方法会更科学,效率会更高,效果会更好。

  3、同学之间相互的探讨和学习,有助于进步和积累人脉。

  结尾:可以平衡两种学习方法,读一个短期导入班,以后在自己慢慢磨练。

  范文展示:(仅供参考)

  A life’s study is considered to be much more important than ever before. For most of us, we only learn and study in schools, but the everlastingly changing world requires us to keep a habit of learning all the time,such as different kinds of practical skills, to confront the life challenge. Here comes a heated debate whether adult should learn by themselves or choose turning to a teacher in classroom. As for me, self-learning and teaching both can not be ignored.

  On one hand, self-learning is much more available for most adults for the simple reason that it demands less time from those who are always under the great pressure of work and family. People can squeeze any time he/she can in daily life for a short learning.Reading a chapter of the textbook during the break will make it easier to finish a heavy one within a week. By contrast, going to courses, night course for example, usually occupies a lot of time after work, which are supposed to be used for relaxing or family time. Moreover, it is the affluent resources online that enable self-learning for adults more possible and practical. There are massive number of courses on some better known video websites, cooking, gardening, language smoothing…..to name a few, which can drag users into any online classroom for something news.

  One the other side, self-learning online may arouse some questions, such as it can not help people solve professional problems unless turning to the real teacher. Besides, it also takes courage, persistence as well as self-controlling for people to learn by themselves online, because there are a great number of temptations through hyperlink all around and it is easy for us to digress from what we are intended to do.

  All in all, teacher can help us to solve professional problems and a class will create a sound learning atmosphere, but the lifestyle of most adult makes it impossible to attending a long term and a time class. The best method is to balance the two ways.

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