2016年11月26日托福写作真题解析【下午场】

2022-06-11 04:43:09

  接下来的内容就是小编给同学们整理的2016年11月26日

  下午场综合写作部分:

阅读 听力
总论点 
安第斯山脉某处的一个建筑的作用不是为了当做堡垒
总论点 
这处建筑确实有防御作用
论点1,这个建筑围墙有很大的缺口,不能作为堡垒 论点1,缺口部分是天然的悬崖屏障
论点2,这个建筑有多个进出口,不符合防御作用 论点2,兽头兽皮不一定是为了打猎做掩护,有时候是宗教仪式
论点3, 不利于或者说没有大量的粮食和水的储存,不利于驻防 论点3,因为该地区十分干旱,不仅仅是防御的人没有充足的水资源,进攻者也没有。

  2016年11月26日下午

  Sample answer:

  The writer and the speaker have a debate on whether the forts in Adens served as defensive construction. The writer provides three reason to refute this, which are opposed by the following lecture.

  First, the writer claims that there are not many walls that can be used to block out the enemy, making them vulnerable to attack. While the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle, according to him/her, in the places that don’t have walls there are natural walls – the cliffs or steep mountains, which can effectively defend the enemy.

  Second, the passage states that those forts have many ground level entranceways, which is adverse for defense. However, the speaker casts doubt on this opinion by saying that Adens are located in the open area and those entranceways can provide people with great visibility, and thus people in the forts can easily spot potential attackers and then block the gate and get prepared. Besides, those entrances are not so wide, so they can easily be closed.

  Last, the writer argues that in the forts there are no food and water storage system, which are unsuitable for people to live. By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, this claim does not hold water. There is no need for such system, because it is dry in Adens, which makes it impossible for the enemy to have enough food and water too if they decide to surround the forts for a long time. So if the forts can withstand the initial attack, the enemy will withdraw themselves.

  下午场独立写作重复2015年12月19日,是一道横向对比题。

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Many people who lead groups believe that they should talk while others listen, but the best leaders often spend more time listening to other people’s ideas than talking about their own ideas. 


  不得不说为师看到这样的题目简直是虎躯一震,这是啥啊,枉费小盆友们一个个紧张的。结果考了两道极普通的题目,上午的教育类题目甚至还被好多老师用来当做教育类和今昔对比的例文来练习。下午的题目虽然长但是简化一下不也是我们所熟知的best leaders often spend more time listening to other people’s ideas than talking about their own ideas. 
广开言路,兼听则明的道理嘛。

Own idea Listen to others
1,leader应该有主见,必须能自己决策。提现领导力 1,听取他人意见可以减少错误,提高效率
2,他人的意见不一定全部是对的,如果减少多方听取意见可以减少讨论耗时的提高工作效率 2,有利于维护团队和谐以及teamwork

  点睛

  题目大意:成为一个受过教育的人现在要比过去更加容易。此题属于典型的古今对比,常见的思考方向有:科技水平、物质水平、受教育水平、人们的意识和观念、社会的趋势和政策。波波建议选择同意,因为高科技的产品出现和人们教育意识的提升。

  2016年11月26日托福独立写作范文

  As is known to all, receiving education has always been the main way for us to acquire knowledge throughout the human civilization history. Recently there has been a hot debate whether education today is more accessible to the public than in the past. As far as I am concerned, there is no doubt that people nowadays have much easier access to education with the following reasons.

  To begin with, the advent of various high-tech products has enriched the ways and approaches to receive education. Obviously, with the introduction of advanced means of education, educational resources take on multiple forms such as distant education and online study, which make knowledge more accessible to us. However, in the past, the only way to get educated was to attend classess in traditional schools, which definitely increases the difficulty of gaining education. For example, in the process of making preparations for TOEFL test, I want to take class in Beijing New Oriental School. But I am an undergraduate student of a university far away from Beijing. Meanwhile, due to the academic pressure from my college study, it is impossible for me to take a month off and to have an intensive course in Beijing. Thanks to the online courses, I can take these classes in my college while handling the tasks and assignment from my field of study. The online courses make possible the in-time response to my questions and online submission of assignments.

  Secondly, since more and more importance is being attached to education, it is much easier and essential to get educated than in the past. Under the society full of intense competition, acquiring formal education has become the essenital precondition for anyone to make a living. As a result, the public awareness of receiving education is much stronger than before, leading to a common phenomenon that an increasing number of parents send their kids to study abroad. However, in the bygone days/in the old days, the requirement for a person was not as strict as it is today, with the result that less attention was paid to education. According to a survey conducted by the National Educational Department in China, the number of students who take the national college entrance examination has risen from 88.3% in 2008 to 92.5% in 2013. Meanwhile, another research shows that the literacy rate in China has increased by 23.6% in 2013 compared with 61.50% in 1993. The above data has shown that the number of educated people has gone through a dramatic rise, which indirectly indicates that education now is more available to the public.

  Admittedly, some areas in the world may be cited as an exception. For instance, people in the war-stricken areas including Iraq and Syria do not have easier access to education and some of them are even on the verge of starvation. In these areas, the current educational situation is not better than that in the past. However, such cases only occupy such a tiny percentage of the global population that they can be neglected.

  In conclusion, I believe that it is much easier for the public to receive education than in the past with the aid of technology and the awakening sense of education.

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