2016年10月29日托福写作真题答案及解析

2022-05-28 08:22:23

  今天小编提供的是2016年10月29日

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  The reading passage points out three strategies to alleviate the extinction of beluga.The professor's lecture deald with the same issue.However, he thinks that countermeasures mentions by author are untenable,which contradicts what the reading states.In the lecture,he uses three specific points to support his idea.

  First,in terms of stricter catching laws and sale regulations,the professor argues in the lecture that it is low possibilitity for fishers to obey them.Then he cites a plenty of relative statistics to illustrate that profit from illegal capture is ten times as that from legal capture. Additionally,listening material emphasizes the fact that fishers have been capturing beluga for a long time.

  Moreover,even though the resding passage suggest to raise and then release begula into wild,the professor argues in the lecture that begula will not be able to suvive when returning to wild nature.This is because domestication renders them vulnerable.

  Finally,the professor asserts that low reproduction rate of begula can be attributed to excessive dams whereas the author of the reading claims that restriction on fishing is a feasible way to boost reproduction rate,The professor proves that this claim is indefensible by pointing out that dams are the biggest obstacle for begula to travel a long distance and arrive their final breeding ground.

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  Knowledge and experience both can give us precious advice in problem-solving. Life is full of unexpected events. When we get stuck in a dilemma, what should we do? To ask others for help or just deal with the problem by our own effort, it’s a Gordian knot. Someone thinks that we should always count on ourselves. Someone would argue that getting advice from others would be the quickest and wisest way. From my perspective, getting advice from others may be more efficient and time-saving.

  Experience and knowledge learned from others contribute greatly to efficiency for a happening. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is far less shining compared with group’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corporation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individual involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.

  Asking others’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, practicalities and personalities of each other.

  Admittedly using one's own knowledge and experience to solve problems can foster our dependence and responsibility, asking advice from others can broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. There is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.

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