接下来的内容是小编整理的2016年10月28日
2016年10月28日
Topic 议题:ways to curtail the spread of Red Palm weevils
Reading | Listening | |
Thesis 总论点 | >The reading points out three ways to curtail the population Red Palm weevils. | Refute the three explanations mentioned in reading passage. |
Sub-point 1 分论点1 |
>The first method is cutting infested trees. | >When there are visible signs in the trees, it’s too late. At that moment the weevils will have reproduced and infest other trees. |
Sub-point2 分论点2 |
>The second way is using traps. | >Phren needs to be changed per week to ensure its efficiency; Otherwise Red Palm weevils will not be attracted and then killed. |
Sub-point 3 分论点3 |
>The third method is using pesticide. | The weevils live inside where pesticide can hardly make an influence. Besides, some weevils will finally be pesticide resistant, and then produce more pesticide-resistant weevils. And that’s catastrophic. |
2016年10月28日托福综合写作范文:Sample answer:
The reading and listening discuss about ways to curtail the spread of Red Palm weevils. The reading points out three ways to curtail the population Red Palm weevils. Whereas, the professor totally refutes the three points presented in the passage.
Firstly, the professor rebuts the reading’s first method of cutting infested trees. He points out that when there are visible signs in the trees, it’s too late. At that moment the weevils will have reproduced and infest other trees.
According to the reading material, using traps can be another effective way to decrease Red Palm weevils. The professor mentions that Phren needs to be changed per week to ensure its efficiency; Otherwise Red Palm weevils will not be attracted and then killed.
At last, reading material point out that pesticide can stop the spreading of Red Palm weevils. However, the professor explains that the weevils live inside where pesticide can hardly make an influence. Besides, some weevils will finally be pesticide resistant, and then produce more pesticide-resistant weevils. And that’s catastrophic.
2016年10月28日托福独立写作题目:
作文题目: |
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is much easier to parents to raise the children today than it was 50 years ago. |
题型类别: | 今昔对比 |
写作思路: |
比较简单的今昔对比的题目。从事实类和利弊类的角度来看,这是一个事实类的题目。 事实类题目的解题方式是找原因或者用拆分法。此题是很好找到3个原因的。 思考一个问题 “raise children”需要具备什么条件? 经济,父母的教育水平,医疗卫生条件,社会福利等。 然后大家再针对性展开即可。 |
写作指导: |
Major point: agree Reason 1. Families nowadays are much wealthier than those 50 years ago. 因为经济的发展,现在大部分家庭都能养得起孩子。就算实在太穷,也能得到政府的资助,或者一些慈善机构的帮助。但是50年前,很多家庭都无法解决温饱问题,同时那时每家每户的孩子又比较多,所以50年前养孩子比现在要难。 Reason 2. The hygiene is much more established now than 50 years before. 当今社会,卫生医疗这块还是相当健全完善的,这使得如今的孩子们能够健康成长。例如现在孩子们出生就会接种疫苗,还会定期进行体检。但是50年以前,医疗卫生条件就差多了,有些孩子可能得个流感都会丧命。(自行举例说明) Reason 3. The welfare is largely improved over the past 50 years. 国家在卫生和教育上的补贴,使得孩子能够更加健康的成长。例如产假方面的政策。发达国家有很多非常好的福利政策。例如新加坡的「婴儿红利」计划,政府会在一对夫妇生第二个或第三个小孩时,将钱存入夫妇的户头,供应其支付托儿所或幼儿园的费用。但是50年前,经济没有那么发达的情况下,国家在这块的福利上也不如现在好。 |
2016年10月28日托福写作范文:
Taking a panoramic picture of human evolution, family education has been playing a very important role, especially in modern days. When it comes to the question of whether or not raising kids is easier than before. I, personally, think that parenting has becoming more and more difficult based on the following reasons.
First off, with the advent of technological gadgets kids are now more susceptible to negative information on-line, making it tough for parents to monitor and guide their kids’ behavior and mindset. As we all know, with the appearance of smart phones, tablets and computer laptops, it is easier for people of all age groups, including adolescents and teenagers, to get access to all kinds of information. To be more specific, celebrities especially entertainers, like movies stars, sports giants and pop singers are such bad exemplars for kids since they are constantly involved in sex scandals, abusive use of drugs, random hookups, getting rehabilitation. Kids, who are in their formative years, are not immune to these negative influence. Therefore, it is becoming absolutely tough for parents to guide them and any negligence might lead to be catastrophic for the kid’s future development.
Additionally, parents are so overwhelmed with their career and they tend to be negligent about their kids. Kids, on the other hand, without guidance from their parents tend to have both psychological and physical problems. A recent study done by National Society of Developmental Psychology indicates that there is a positive correlation between the parents’ working time and the likelihood for kids to experience psychological and physical problems in their adolescence. Indeed, fathers and mothers are more stressful and inclined to work more hours than those who did a few decades ago, leaving them little time to hang out and caress their kids. To make matters worse, kids who might experience unparalleled peer pressure, bullying and other kinds of school cliché are not able to get appropriate and timely instruction and encouragement from their parents, increasing the risk of a series of developmental problems. For instance, they might get addicted to computer games, involve in early sex, and even have marijuana and drinking problems.
In conclusion, due to the susceptibility of kids when exposed to negative information on-line or else and the parents’ lack of time spent with their kids, it is getting more difficult to raise kids now and kids are inclined to have both psychological and physical problems in their formative years.