雅思真题:2014年5月10日雅思写作解析

2022-06-10 05:34:04

  Task 1 分析

  考题:流程图

  The flow chart shows the process of making soft cheese.

  考情分析和预测:

  考生们最害怕的流程图或地图题,去年2013出现在2、4、5、8、9、10月,其中2月出现2次;今年上半年分别出现在1、3、5月中,其中3月出现了2次,分别在月首和月尾,因此,隔月出现的频率应该会继续保持。5月再次出现的几率不大。下半年出现几率在3次左右。上几个月痴线了线状和柱状比较多,因此之后可能倾向饼状和表格的考察。

  得分要点:

  流程图要写清楚三点:连接词替换、不同句型、适合动词;看懂是前提。

  Task 2 分析

  题目:

  Man should take on household tasks such as cleaning or childcare as women.

  To what extent do you agree of disagree?

  考情分析:

  关于男女地位问题的变形考察,类似的变行可会体现为:

  父母对孩子的不同影响是什么?

  父母共同对孩子都有抚养义务吗?

  在剑桥2中的老题目:

  Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as mother?

  To what extent do you agree of not?

  审题要点:

  关注关键词,household, 在分析时,可扩展其内容进行论证。

  思路分析:(仅供参考)

  明确立场:基本同意

  开头:简单引入话题

  第一段:男人应该承担家务的原因和好处

  原因

  1 社会大背景,平等

  2 有些事情女人做不了,举例子

  好处

  1 对家庭:融洽关系,增进感情

  2 对孩子:更负责任,更有效果

  第二段:有一些例外情况

  1、女人更适合做的

  2、男人更适合做的

  总结:

  总体而言,男人应该承担家务,但是最好合理分配。

  范文展示:(仅供参考)

  Women are required to do most of the household tasks from the views of many people. However, with the rising social and financial status of them, the role of male and female could be changed in some families. From my perspective, it is very necessary for men to share the household work with their spouses. What is more, it is no more embarrassing for men to be in charge of the housework.

  Doing household tasks especially those demand strength and professional skills like moving furnitures or fixing bulbs is aways beyond the female capacities. By contrast, what they are really good at is to cleaning the house, classifying the cupboard or caring the baby, which asks more consideration and patience. Moreover, with the rising status of female during the past centuries and the conception of equality, it is without any doubt that men should take up the duty to relieve burdens of their mates.

  Under such background, there comes a great number of advantages both for parents and kids, among which, the sound relationship is created during the co-work between husbands and wives. It is reported that many couples suffer the communication problems or the so called “cold violence” due to the great pressure nowadays. Doing housework together cannot only relax each other from the fast pace work but enhance the communication during the process as well. Additionally, caring babies together turns to be a wise choice for the children to develop in a balancing way, because the influences from motherhood and fatherhood are different. For instance, mother impresses their babies by her tenderness while father by his toughness. In this way, any child can grow up in a sound environment, a truly important factor for future development. Moreover, it is not strange at all that some men would like to do more housework more than their busy working and higher income wives. A case centers on Ann Lee, a internationally known movie director, who had spent almost 7 years doing housework, cooking and caring babies before he became prestigious.

  All in all, it is necessary for men to take part in the housework in modern families. And, if possible, men also have the right to be in main charge of the family work, since they find it much suitable for them.

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