不仅分类和案例。
在托福写作的过程中,想要吸引阅卷官的注意,开头和结尾部分都是非常重要的环节。而想要把握好开头和结尾部分也是可以有一定的规则可循的。
1.再次陈述主题
用 paraphrase 方式再次呈现主题陈述中出现的三要素:
a.问题中存在争议的地方;
b.观点;
c.理由。
2.结束句
结束句,放在陈述完主题之后。
下面
1.如此结论
一篇文章说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语:
to sum up,in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus,it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2.如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
不管怎样,考生一定要记住一个漂亮的结尾就像一个好的收官一样,假如前面的内容差强人意,也许还有反败为胜的可能。
3.重申立场+反方观点的弱点
例如:托福写作题目:When people go on a trip, some like to go with a friend while others like to go alone. Which do you prefer?
我方立场:I would rather to travel with a friend.
托福独立写作结尾:Taking all of the fACTors above into account, being accompanied by some close friends tends to be a better option when it comes to having a trip. This even makes more sense if one is fully aware of the possible dangers of travelling on one’s own, that is, being helpless when emergencies occur and having no one to share the excitement.
解析:这个结尾采用了重申立场+反方观点的弱点。“考虑到以上所列出的论点,我们可得知当说到旅游时有人陪伴是一个更好的选择。这点更说得通,如果一个人清楚地明白独自旅行潜藏的坏处,即遇到紧急情况的无助感以及无人分享旅途的兴奋感。“语言上的主语替换尤为灵活,I would rather to trav
4.重申立场+反问句
例如:托福写作题目:Some people like to live in a small town, while others like to live in a large city. If you had a choice, where would you like to live?
我方立场:I would like to live in a big city.
托福独立写作结尾: Although a growing number of serenity-seekers regard the smaller community as their dream homeland, I still opt for the metropolis for its convenience and dynamic life. When it comes to living, how can one possibly deny that the purpose of life is to explore new things that small towns fail to offer?
解析:这个结尾采用了重申立场+反问句的写法,很大气。“尽管越来越多寻找宁静的都市人把小城市视作自己的梦想家园,但我仍然觉得大城市更胜一筹。当谈到生活,谁能否认生活的目的不就是探索新的东西吗?而这一切都是小城市无法给与 的。“ 反问句写的是反方立场的弱点,这其实在内容和Plan B是相同的,只不过用的反问句来加强语气。
关于托福作文结尾模板分类介绍已经提供给同学们了,可以按照这些方法和模板练习,当然还是要有自己的想法和观点,才能更吸引考官。