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我们从一些案例中,揭示一下托福写作最后一段的要点和方法吧:
关于奥巴马的演讲的分析,其实最后一段基本不外乎“发表倡议”和“展望未来” 两大功能,就写作而言只需再加上一句话“总结 全文”即可。
第一句:总结全文
第二句:发表倡议
第三局:展望未来
总结全文的句型
• Based on the above reasons, I firmly believe…
• From what I have discussed above, we may safely arrive at/reach/come to /draw the conclusion that…
• Judging from all the evidence offered, we may suggest that…
• All the above facts go to show that…
发表倡议的句型
• It is high time that parents, educators and the government made combined efforts to …
• It is prime time that we put (此处必须为动词过去式,是一种虚拟语气的句型,背下来最关键) considerable/great/special/emphasis on…
• My suggestion is that more people from all walks of life should be encouraged to…
• It is, therefore, evident that the task of... requires attention.
• The general awareness of the necessity and importance =of…might be the first step to solve this problem.
展望未来的句型
• Only in this way can we have a better and brighter future.(此处必须用倒装句一定记住)
• Just imagine how great the world would be if only we…
• I believe a happy and bright future is awaiting us if we can …
引言(比较难想不到俗语就不用了)
领导式 Bossy Style
领导就是领导,一拿起话筒就特有“范儿”。托福作文的领导式结尾一般都是回顾主体段的观点.偶尔高兴了还会再小展望一下未来。
比如Kaplan中这个关于“班级规模到底应该多大合适”的结尾段就是纯粹的领导式(但是请注意它没有照搬上文的词句,而是paraphrase和summary,这一点请要当“领导”的朋友们切记):
Reducing class size is not just a matter of relieving(减轻)pressure. It will enhance what a student learns and even the person they learn it from can learn from this process. (The End)
很大牌吧?两句话就结束全文,根本不给你反驳的机会。
再看这个处级干部:
In conclusion, university education should not be made free. I believe in that because the colleges need the money to make them better. If the universities are free, taxes will be raised and people will have to pay for things they might not use.
此外,领导式结尾中还有一种极度嚣张的形式,已经接近给读者最后通牒,所以这样的结尾也可以称为“大爷式”。
比如Princeton Review中的这个结尾段,就是典型的mogul style:
In conclusion, I have shown that it's better for teachers to encourage their students to question things. Without curiosity there can be no education.
领导式结尾非常适合作“一边倒”作文的结尾段,不过要注意这种写法除了转述上文外,最好能再深入写一点相关的引申,这样显得结尾更充实。
愤青式 The beat generation style
看名宇就很好理解,对话题冷眼看待.有一种自命清高的书生气。但如果确实语言功底不错,而且确信能把自己不同流合污的价值取向表达清晰,用这种结尾倒真是相当不俗的。多给大家看个例子:
Needless to say, both sources are important to us. But in my opinion, knowledge from experience is even more important because without experience, it's almost impossible to understand knowledge from books'or to understand how to apply this knowledge in real life.
这种结尾通常是先用Apparently, ../Clearly, .../Needless to say,…/It goes without saying that...等表达在结尾段首对辩论话题表示不屑,然后再用However,…/But.../Yet.../Nevertheless, ... / Still,…这类词汇引出一两句表明自己态度的结束语。
一般关于托福作文最后一段的方法可以总结为表达立场法、总结前文法、前瞻感言法、建议措施法、呼吁号召法、综合方法等等,同学们要根据话题的不同选择合适的方法。