雅思写作成绩提升方法介绍

2022-05-31 12:30:04

  【如何提高雅思写作成绩一:避免使用语意弱的“be”动词】

  1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。

  这个技巧并不是那么容易掌握,但是确实是一个能够提高雅思写组成绩的非常实用的技巧。

  Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

  Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape.(转换为前置定语)

  2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。

  1) Weak:The team members are good players.

  Revision:The team members play well.

  2) Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

  Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

  3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。

  1)Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.

  Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.

  2)Weak:Here are the books you ordered.

  Revision:The books you ordered have arrived.

  【如何提高雅思写作成绩二:多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了】

  这样的具体描写可以让文章看起来更具说服力,当然也就可以提高雅思写作成绩了。

  1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk.

  Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

  2、Poor:She is a careful shopper.

  Better:She compares prices and quality.

  【如何提高雅思写作成绩三:尽量运用主动语态】

  之所以要这样做,是因为很多人不明白什么时候该用主动,什么时候该用被动。用错了,当然也就谈不上提高雅思写作成绩了。

  1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity.

  Better:Charity has supported the organization.

  2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

  Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

  【如何提高雅思写作成绩四:防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语】

  想要提高雅思写作成绩就得使写作的用词简单,生动。

  1、Wordy:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

  Improved:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

  2、Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow yourrecommendations.

  Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow yourrecommendation.

  3、Redundant:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistrylaboratory caught fire.

  Improved:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratorycaught fire.

  4、Redundant:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in differentstores.

  Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

  【如何提高雅思写作成绩五:杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语】

  这是语言考试,不是专业考试,提高雅思写作成绩的关键点在语言上,是文章的表现力上!

  1、Weak:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

  Improved:They will not agree to any of his proposals.

  2、Weak:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expendituresnext fall.

  Improved:I need her financial figures before I can estimate ourexpenditures next fall.

  因此,文章的表现力对于雅思写作的出彩与否密切相关,希望对广大的烤鸭们有所启示,祝大家考试顺利,争取拿高分。

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