下面就是今天
第二次课:
写作的动作:命令指示;说明说服
文章中排列元素的方式:
1 二分法进行排列:
三种:简单到复杂;已知到未知;次要到重要
2 根据逻辑关系进行排列:
三种逻辑关系:并列、递进、转折
三种结构方式:
a)第一、二段并列,第二、三段递进
b)第一、二段递进,第二、三段转折
c)第一、二段转折,第二、三段递进
例:43. Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
参考分析:
罗列出三个理由,比如:
金钱 One of the most obvious reasons that people perform dangerous activities might be the drive of money.
举例:特技演员stunt man 战地摄影师
追求快乐的欲望 The desired purpose of happiness
无知 Sometimes blind brave comes out of ignorance.
注意:说明性文字的原则是简洁、朴素、有效。
例:6. If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
参考分析:
改变其环境,因为一个好的环境会使人们
更加快乐 happier
更加健康 healthier
更加有效率 productive achievement