托福写作讲义资料(2)

2022-06-13 05:52:54

  下面就是今天

  第二次课:

  写作的动作:命令指示;说明说服

  文章中排列元素的方式:

  1 二分法进行排列:

  三种:简单到复杂;已知到未知;次要到重要

  2 根据逻辑关系进行排列:

  三种逻辑关系:并列、递进、转折

  三种结构方式:

  a)第一、二段并列,第二、三段递进

  b)第一、二段递进,第二、三段转折

  c)第一、二段转折,第二、三段递进

  例:43. Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  参考分析:

  罗列出三个理由,比如:

  金钱 One of the most obvious reasons that people perform dangerous activities might be the drive of money.

  举例:特技演员stunt man 战地摄影师

  追求快乐的欲望 The desired purpose of happiness

  无知 Sometimes blind brave comes out of ignorance.

  注意:说明性文字的原则是简洁、朴素、有效。

  例:6. If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

  参考分析:

  改变其环境,因为一个好的环境会使人们

  更加快乐 happier

  更加健康 healthier

  更加有效率 productive achievement

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