雅思写作机经大作文2013年1月10日
题目: The most important thing of people's life is his or her work. Without satisfying career, the life is meaningless.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, unemployment rate in many countries is rising. Job satisfaction has been widely considered an important factor that contributes to one’s meaningful life. Personally, I disagree with such a point of view.
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段落此段结构1 描述现实
2 表达观点
此段功能首段开篇摆明观点:工作并不是生活最重要的部分
A decent and well-paid job usually brings about wealth and reputation to one person. Additionally, most of fresh graduates look at hunting for a good job as the final target of their academic lives, as they have devoted many years and much energy to the acquisition of knowledge. Therefore, they are in urgent need of an expected rate of return, which is able to be fulfilled by a satisfying occupation.
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段落此段结构1 反面让步：工作可以给人带来财富和名气
2 反面让步：多年的学习就是为了工作的回报
此段功能本段是文章第二段， 从反面进行让步，简单概括工作的重要性
We would be well-advised to judge from various aspects. For example, we are also supposed to see how much contribution does he or she has made to the society. Take road cleaners for example. They have to complete road cleaning work almost every single day, which is considered repetitive and boring, always on the verge of danger. But, without their careful cleaning, we are unable to live in a tidy and picturesque community.
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段落此段结构1 一句话总起说明要全面的看待问题
2 以清洁工的例子说明有些工作并不那么另劳动者满意，却能为社会做出巨大的贡献
此段功能本段是文章第三段，举例支持作者的观点
Overall, a satisfying job cannot be exclusively regarded as the basis of a meaningful life. After what have been mentioned above, I am convinced that different people have different definition of “meaningful”. We should by no means disrespect those who are doing trivial but altruistic jobs.
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段落此段结构全文总结
此段功能再次点明一个另人满意的工作不一定就是生活的全部意义所在
满分要素剖析：
一、语言表达
本文没有机械的运用first, second这样一类常用的连接词，却在论述的过程当中形成自然的逻辑，条理清晰，衔接连贯。请注意学习本文段与段，意群和意群之间的过渡和衔接。
1. Additionally, most of fresh graduates look at hunting for a good job as the final target of their academic lives, as they have devoted many years and much energy to the acquisition of knowledge.
本句为本文中相对较长的句子。意为：大多刚毕业的学生把找到一个好工作作为自己求学的最终目的，因为这么多年来他们已经花了很大精力在获取知识上面。
2. They have to complete road cleaning work almost every single day, which is considered repetitive and boring, always on the verge of danger.
从句which指代的是road cleaning work。本句由几个小短句构成，描述了清洁工枯燥重复的工作。
二、逻辑结构
本文是典型的总分总结构的议论文。作者运用先破后立的论证手法，开篇先陈述事实并表达观点，第二段从反面提出有一份满意的工作确实很重要。第三段笔锋一转，举例论证自己的观点。最后一段话对文章进行了总结和升华。