雅思写作机经大作文2013年1月5日
题目: Some people think that people who prefer to read for pleasure will have better imagination and language skills than people who like watching TV.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Reading books and watching TV are two main channels to cultivate imagination and develop language skills. Nowadays, a controversial issue about whether individuals reading books for enjoyment are more capable of practicing their vision and taking a command of languages or not has been into fierce discussion. In my opinion, reading can better people’s imagination and language abilities.
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段落此段结构1 描述现实
2 表达观点
此段功能首段表明观点：阅读更能帮助提升人们的想象力和语言能力
There is no denying that TV viewers are able to experience both visual and sound effects at the same time. As a result, their imagination could be stimulated to a large extent. What is more, watching TV programs is absolutely a good way for children to improve their communicative skills, as they cannot recognize as many words as adults.
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段落此段结构1 反面让步：看电视有助于提升想象力
2 反面让步：看电视有助于提高孩子的交流能力
此段功能本段是文章第二段， 从反面进行让步，简要概括了看电视的两个好处
However, from books, readers are not only able to grasp the author’s concepts and ideas, but also have a comprehensive understanding of the social background. Another merit of reading is that people can improve their language abilities, especially in expanding vocabulary and improving writing skills. Reading for enjoyment definitely can stimulate one’s imagination. Unlike watching TV, readers cannot see the vivid pictures but the lines. They have to associate the words with certain things in their mind, thereby arousing their imagination.
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段落此段结构1 论据一：读书不仅让读者理解概念和思想，而且全面了解社会背景
2 论据二：读书提升人的语言能力
3 论据三：读书能无限激发人的想象力
此段功能本段是文章第三段，列举三大论据，从正面论述读书的优点
To sum up, although watching TV may have certain positive impacts on viewers’ imagination and language skills, reading books are able to develop individuals’ such capacities better, I believe, due to the diversity of books. The point is that people are supposed to read more, not regarding studying as a burden, but reading for pleasure, which is the most important factor readers should consider.
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段落此段结构1 强调论点：相比较而言，读书更有助于提高想象力和语言能力
2进一步升华论点：应当在快乐中阅读，不要把它当作负担
此段功能全文总结
满分要素剖析：
一、语言表达
本文的一个特色是灵活运用长短句交错，使得论证的语气充满了节奏感。长句中也适当的运用插入语，使得句子更有节奏感和力量。
1. Nowadays, a controversial issue about whether individuals reading books for enjoyment are more capable of practicing their vision and taking a command of languages or not has been into fierce discussion.
本句指出题干中的问题一直是人们争议的焦点。句型a controversial issue about…has been into fierce discussion可以用于同类议论文的开篇。
2. The point is that people are supposed to read more, not regarding studying as a burden, but reading for pleasure, which is the most important factor readers should consider.
本句的which从句修饰the point。从句强调了快乐读书的重要性，应当得到读者的重视。
3. To sum up, although watching TV may have certain positive impacts on viewers’ imagination and language skills, reading books are able to develop individuals’ such capacities better, I believe, due to the diversity of books.
本句前半句直截了当的将论点再次重申，然后用插入语I believe再次强调了自己的立场，最后简单解释了原因。此处插入语赋予原句节奏感和力量。
二、逻辑结构
本文是典型的总分总结构的议论文，写作手法为先破后立。开篇先陈述事实并表明观点，第二段先从反面进行一定让步，辩证的思考问题，紧接着第三段从正面有理有据的进行陈述。最后一段话总结并升华作者观点。