Task 1 flow chats
The diagram shows the process of how to make smoked fish.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (附两个版本的小作文流程回忆图)
分析:
流程图难度不大,只要看懂步骤,按一般套路写作即可。
这道题也有考察同学们对生活的留意程度,见过剖鱼和熏鱼的同学应该能根据尝试很快理解图画。
题目总共有八个步骤,关键在于对步骤进行分类。在范文里将1,2,3,4归为一个段落,因为都是描述制作熏鱼之前的准备,5,为一段,是从鱼变成熏鱼的过程,6,7和8为第三段,描述了熏鱼制作完成后的分类运输。当然,有其它的分类方法也可。不过以不超过四段为宜。
小作文要客观,有什么就写什么,切记主观推断。
感谢提供流程图的高人,因为图为手绘,范文仅供参考。
Word count: 163
Sample Answer
The flow diagram indicates eight steps of making smoked fish. The first step is killing fish and then emptying the fish. The second step is to preserve fish in salt and water, which will cost thirty minutes. Then, fish will be fired for five minutes before putting them into a fish bucket.
The first four steps provide a good preparation for the fifth step and also the most important process which is called smoking. The fish bucket is made of wood. The burning coal is at the bottom of the whole bucket, and covered by a layer of sawdust(此处图片信息不全,仅做参考). The space between sawdust and the top of bucket is packed with fish.
After the smoking step, all fishes will be divided into two types. One type is smoking fish which will be packed in boxes and the other type will be further processed by yellow coloring and then packed into buckets. Finally, all the boxes and buckets will be loaded into trucks.
Task 2
题目类别 | 旅行,文化 | 提问方式 | A/D |
考试题目 | |||
It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about the other culture. We can learn as much as from books, films and internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree? |
分析:
题目有一定难度。题干指出文章需要论述的是旅游与学习旅游目的地文化之间的关系,单独论述旅游的利弊,属于跑题。题干给出了书籍,电影和网络三种获取旅游文化信息的媒介,在写作时尽量从这三种媒介取材进行论述,写其他媒介可能会偏题。文章比较抽象,在支持观点时建议举例论证。
范文是双边论证
支持观点:
l 书本和网络记录了各地游客的经历,能在较短时间内获取大量目的地相关文化信息,全面地了解当地文化.因为许多限制因素,普通游客无法了解到全部的文化信息,亲自去了也未必了解深入。
反对观点:
l 书本等出版物有时效性,书本中记录的文化现象在旅行时已经改变
l 电影和网络上的信息可信度不高,电影是艺术,是夸张化的;网络上的信息和言论缺乏权威性
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In recent years, people have been interested in making a long journey to some unfamiliar cities which are far from their hometown. One of their tourism purposes is mainly to experience the local culture and learn the traditions. However, someone doubts that people can obtain culture-related information through books, films and internet instead of travel. I disagree on this view to a certain degree, although books, films and internet are useful resources for providing valuable cultural information.
It is a time-saving way to search comprehensive cultural information concerning tourism destinations by using books and the internet. Many published travel guide books have summarized helpful strategies and explored cultural landscape in detail for tourists like Lonely Planet and National Geographic. People nowadays also tend to record their journey on some online travel websites such as Trip Advisor, which offer a convenient platform for worldwide travelers to share their own cultural experiences. Also, general public may not get an insight into local customs and traditions when they are traveling, due to some objective limiting factors like holiday length, tourism budget and language barrier.
As primary travelling information sources, books, films and internet all have their obvious drawbacks. Travel records on travel notes may have been out of date when tourists are reading them as everything is changing in a country in the age of globalization, including cultural sector. For example, Spanish women have no longer used a fan as a kind of body language. Besides, information from films and internet seems to show a lack of reliability. Film is a kind of art which is exaggerated and dramatic in the respect of content description. On the internet, every net user can express their opinions to a same cultural phenomenon or traditional event so that the word-of mouth is not authoritative and objective to a high degree.
To summarise, relying on books, films and the internet to obtain cultural information is not enough because lacks trust and authority, even though these resources are sufficient and accessible. The combination of travel and knowledge (from books, films and internet) would be the best choice.