托福写作范文赏析:电子书与纸质书

2022-06-08 13:56:56

  

  今天为大家整理的写作范文是关于“电子书和纸质书”话题的辩论,看那些年考试对于这类话题写出的高分作文,他们是如何雄辩此话题的,一起来领略一下他们当年的风采吧!

  In twenty years from now, students will not use printed books any more. 20年以后,学生们将不再使用纸媒书籍,是否认同? (2009年3月29 日)

  【题目解析】20年以后,学生们不再使用纸媒书籍 = 电子书籍可以完全取得纸媒阅读,是否同意?

  【作家立场】电子书籍有其优势,但是,纸媒书籍依然不会被代替,尤其是对于学生而言。

  【写作思路】让步反驳:三分让步;七分反驳

  【思路拓展】

  纸媒书籍存在的理由和不可替代性:

  1. 无论电子阅读多么便利和有趣,很多学生改变不了用纸媒书籍学习的习惯。例如,我的同龄人,他们不习惯也不喜欢电子书,尤其是以电子书作为教科书,因为电子阅读极其不便,无法随时地做标记和笔记。

  2. 对比其他的电子读物,传统的纸媒有其优势。具体而言,很多电子小说可随意发表,质量难保证,但是,纸媒书籍,比较而言,内容优质。 例如,作为文学爱好者,我喜欢阅读文学作品, 网络小说很少吸引我,因为其内容比较庸俗,文笔很差,极少带来阅读快感。相反,我自己喜欢阅读一本名为《作家》的杂志,我不读网络杂志,因为拿到一本新书的感觉很踏实,淡淡的墨香激发我立刻阅读的兴趣。

  手机阅读或网络阅读的利好:(让步段)

  我承认,电子阅读也有其流行的理由,例如:储存量大,携带便利,价格低廉,资源丰富,比较环保。但是,我想反驳的是:电子阅读也有其弊端。比如,长期接触电子辐射有害视力,另外,电子书库信息量很大,有时候,我们反而无从选择自己的喜欢的书籍。

  【尾段总结】电子阅读仅仅是传统阅读的一种有效的补充,而非替代品。

  【基础写作语料库】

  1. printed books n印刷书籍

  2. e-reading n电子阅读

  3. deeply rooted reading habit n 根深蒂固的阅读习惯

  4. can never replace traditional way of reading v永远无法代替传统的阅读方式

  5. A and B are not mutually exclusive …… 和 …… 不是互相排斥的

  【原创语料库】

  1. The past century has witnessed tremendous technological progress and these changes re-shaped some people’s reading choices. 一百年来,科技在进步,这种进步也改变了很多人的阅读选择。

  解析:tremendous = great 巨大的

  2. People still read, however,some people might have different preferences such as on-line reading or appreciating their favorite books via the cell phone 人们依然在阅读,但是,人们的喜好也许在变化,例如很多人喜欢网络阅读和手机阅读。

  解析:via prep通过

  3. Some people argue that if the popularity of e-reading keeps expanding at current rate, our reading will be dominated by on-line or cell phone reading two decades later 有人认为如果电子阅读以这样的速度上升,20年后,手机阅读和网络阅读最终将会占据主导地位。

  4. It is true that the number of reading printed books is, to some extent,declining, but, this trend does not necessarily indicate conventional way of reading will give way to e-reading. 的确,那些阅读印刷书籍的人数在一定程度上减少,但是,这不一定意味着电子阅读会取代传统阅读。

  5. The quality of many e-books cannot be ensured because almost every individual can publish articles on line,conversely,reading printed books with excellent contents can stir readers’ imagination, tap their creativity and deepen their insights into their lives. 因为几乎人人可以发表网络文章,所以,很多电子读物的质量难以保障,相反,阅读内容优质的纸媒书籍可以激发人的想象力,开发人的创造性,加深人对于生活的洞察。

  6. Indeed,I have to concede that many readers,especially teenagers, seem to be drawn to the popular e-reading.我承认,很多人,尤其是青少年读者,似乎被被流行的电子阅读所吸引。

  7. Nonetheless,I want to rebut that on no account can we neglect the downsides triggered by e-reading. 但是,我想反驳的是任何情况下我们不能忽视电子阅读带来的弊端。

  8. First,as for some of my peers,it is hard for them to change deeply rooted habit of reading printed books or newspapers. 对于我的很多同龄人而言,他们很难改变根深蒂固的阅读纸媒的习惯。

  9. No matter how convenient or amusing e-reading is,I still have a preference for reading printed newspapers and magazines.无论电子阅读多么便利和有趣,我依然喜欢阅读印刷版的报纸杂志。

  10. For example,as a literature fancier,I take keen interest in reading a magazine entitled Writer,I can either read printed book or and enjoy on-line magazine, however, I still have a sentimental attachment to the traditional way of reading 例如,我是文学发烧友,很喜欢阅读一本名为《作家》的杂志,我可以选择购买书籍,也可以选择网络阅读,但是,我始终对于传统的阅读方式更加依赖.

  解析:have a sentimental attachment to 对于……有情感的依恋

  11. The ink fragrance of the book never fails to make me feel at ease, when holding a newly published magazine, I usually have an impulse of browsing the book and make some personal notes immediately .一本新书散发着墨香,拿在手里,比较踏实,我可以随时笔记。

  解析:make me feel at ease v使我感到心安

  12. E-books enjoy their unique merits. To name just a few, e-books have large storage room, are easy to carry, have rich on-line resources and so on 电子阅读有其独有的利好, 例如,电子书存储量大,携带便利,资源丰富等等。

  13. Seen from the perspective of health, chronic exposure to the screen might impair one’s eyesight 从健康的角度而言,长期接触电子辐射有害视力。

  解析:chronic adj 长期的

  解析:impair one’s eyesight v 有害视力

  14. With the availability of an ocean of e-books,sometimes,it is hard for readers to select their favorite books. 电子书库信息量很大,有时候,读者反而无从选择他们的喜欢的书籍。

  15. The ideal learning effect created by printed books can never be matched by e-reading. 使用纸媒书籍,效果更佳,电子阅读,难以实现。

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