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Plants can provide food, shelter, clothing, or medicine. What is one kind of plant that is important to you or the people in your country? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
The coconut tree is a very important plant in my country. Coconut tree plantations are important sources of revenue food, and shelter, and benefit our country economically and socially.
Our country earns a lot of money from the export of coconut tree products like copra, coconuts, coconuts oil, and coconut milk. This has been the main sources of our foreign exchange for over a century. In fact, many of our coconut plantations were established by various colonial powers and now, since independence, are run by our own citizens.
We not only export the food products of the coconut tree, we also eat them ourselves. The coco is the basis of much of our national cuisine, we is famous for curries made rich and sweet by locally-produced coconut milk. We also use the coconut oil to fry our foods as well as to add shine to our skin and hair.
The fronds of the coconut tree are also used to cover the walls and roofs of temporary shelters. The breezes pass through the fronds and cool the interior, but the heavy rains, which fall almost daily during the wet seasons, do not enter.
The coconut tree is a very versatile and useful plant. It has served me, my family, and our country well.
满分要素剖析：
一、语言表达
本文语言以简洁为主要特点，比较多简单句的组合。在句子比较长的时候，作者适当的断句既理清了句子结构，也形成了文章独特的韵律和节奏。
1、The breezes pass through the fronds and cool the interior, but the heavy rains, which fall almost daily during the wet seasons, do not enter. 这句话是基于作者的经验所描述的椰叶为人们遮风挡雨的情境，生动优美，让人仿佛身临境。Breeze微风，pass through穿过，fronds椰林，cool the interior让室内保持清凉，下雨用fall做动词。这一系列的活动组成了十分具有画面感的描述句，而简单句和复杂从句的穿插使用，适当的断句，使得句子读起来很有散文的韵味。
2、Coconut tree plantations are important sources of revenue food, and shelter, and benefit our country economically and socially. Plantation表示种植园，大农场，benefit在这里直接用主动的语态，接宾语，比较常用的结构是被动态benefit from。
二、逻辑结构
本文是从个人，家庭和国家三个角度分三个方面分别论述椰树给我们带来了哪些好处，首先对于个人和家庭来说，椰树是一种用途广泛的植物，它的各个部分都能运用在日常生活中，食用，或者为我们遮风挡雨;对于国家来说，椰树以及相关产品的出口能为国家带来外汇收入，创造财富。结合作者的生活经验，基于作者的了解比较全面地证明了椰树的价值。
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