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综合写作:讨论the reasons why Mary Rose sank。
Topic 议题:the reasons why Mary Rose sank
Reading Listening
Thesis 总论点 Three reasons Refute the three reasons mentioned in reading passage.
Sub-point 1
分论点1 The gunspot was not closed after getting fire, but they forgot to close it. Water poured in to gunspot. According to a research, there were still some connonballs in the gunspot, which proved that it cannot be opened.
Sub-point2
分论点2 Sailors dislike the captain and do not follow his lead. Mary rose is flag ship. Sailors are all capable, so they will not fail to follow the captain’s lead under such dangerous situation.
Sub-point 3
分论点3 French made significant damage to the ship. Frenchmen told a lie in order to show that hey were powerful than English.
Sample answer:
The reading and listening materials have a conflict of opinions about the sinking of Mary Rose war ship. The writer puts forwards three reasons, which are contradicted by the following lecture.
Firstly, the writer claims that the gunspot was not closed after getting fire, but they forgot to close it. Water poured in to gunspot, while the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle. According to him/her, according to a research, there were still some connonballs in the gunspot, which proved that it cannot be opened.
Secondly, the author states that sailors dislike the captain and do not follow his lead.. However, the speaker opposes the writer’s opinion by saying that Mary rose is flag ship. Sailors are all capable, so they will not fail to follow the captain’s lead under such dangerous situation.
Thirdly, the passage argues that French made significant damage to the ship.. By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, the reading’s claim doesn’t hold water,Frenchmen told a lie in order to show that hey were powerful than English..
In conclusion, the professor clearly identifies the weakness in the reading passage and convincingly shows these reasons are incorrect.
独立写作:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to finish a project completely then to do another job than to do two or more projects at the same time.
题型类别: 二选一型
题材类别: 利弊类
相关旧题: 2008.12.6 ML
写作思路:
这道题目是一道题老题,选择一方进行简单的利弊分析即可,但是对于这种比较对比类型的题目还需要在段落内部进行对比,使得文章的论证更加严谨。
写作指导:
1. 集中注意力才能有效地提高工作的效率。如果关注于几个项目,不但会影响工作的进程,还会影响每个项目的质量。
2. 有安排的做计划能够有助于提升个人的组织和计划能力。当每个人被分配到几个工作的时候,肯定有一个是相对比较重要的,我们要学会分轻重缓急,优先解决最重要的问题。
3. 轻松地状态有助于工作的效率。一个人在压力很大的时候很难关注到每个细节,正所谓细节决定成败。想象一个科学家做研究的时候忽略了一个小的细节,后果可能非常严重。
范文指导:
Nowadays, the intensive competition urges people to devote most of their time to the job. In order to save time, some people would prefer to do several projects at a time. However, it is by no means a reasonable arrangement.
First, high efficiency of work largely depends on the focus of attention. According to a research conducted by a prestigious university, when more focused, people’s minds will quickly produce a special substance, which stimulates thinking power. Under this circumstance, more remarkable outcomes will be produced. On the contrary, People, engaging in different jobs, are more likely to get distracted. Not only will it adversely affected the working pace as a whole, but it also lower the quality of these projects. Let’s assume a person who just totally immersed in one project about various data. However, in the halfway, he/she began to do another project, which was to sum up the problems of this quarterly budget. In this case, when he/she looked back on the previous job, he/she will, definitely, be confused by some figures. Thus,stopping one temporarily and changing to others causes unwanted consequences.
Second, finishing projects one by one enables people to improve the outstanding planning and organizing skills. On the one hand, everyone, undoubtedly, faces heavy workload, and It is neither possible nor realistic to focus on only one thing. Therefore, encountering some projects, people have to set priorities, which means working on the most significant problems first, solving them, and then going on to relatively secondary difficulties. On the other hand, what people also need to do is to formulate a timetable to constrain them. That is to say, people should require themselves to finish one project within the allotted time, and then move to the next step. Adopting this method several times, people’s planning and organizing skills will be significantly enhanced.
Thirdly, less stressful minds guarantee high work efficiency. Doing several jobs at a time impose overwhelming pressure on people so that they may become more worried and anxious. In this case, rarely will people concentrate on crucial details. As a saying goes, little things matter. Only when we give consideration to every necessary detail can we succeed. Take a scientific research as an example. If a scientist, because of unduly pressure, fails to focus on a tiny point, he/she may bring serious risks to this research.
All in all, It appears more effectively to do several jobs at a time, but it is not the case in reality. Focus is more necessary to every project.
词汇拓展:
Unduly过度的
Immerse 沉浸在
Engage in 从事…事业
As a whole 整体而言
Priority 优先权
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