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When famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a common social phenomenon, that when famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. In my point of view, I have no doubt that we shouldpay lessattention to those opinions even we are their fans.
First of all, those sports stars or music stars are not professors or experts but common people. Their opinions are just personal views. Every person has his own understandings about the world. It is a basic human right. We cannot say whose opinion is absolutely right or whose is totally wrong,but only if some of them are illegal. So we should pay no attention to those famous people’s words. People like the stars only because they do very well in their domains. A lot of well-known stars have been invited to make advertisements on TV or magazines. They are all eager to do that because it will bring them a large amount of money. And usually most of them care little about the quality of the products. If we believe in them and buy the product, maybe we will be fooled. So we should judge by ourselves and have our own choices.
Secondly, some of those famous people are not well educated. They have spent most of their time training. As a result, they really know little about other subjects. If we totally accept their opinions, we may be misled. For example, when a female athlete tells people her ways of losing weight, she maysay“Trust me please, you can become slim like me!” Some young girls will follow her advice and do what she has told them to do. What will the result be? As we all know, athletes are healthy and stout, their body bearing strength is better than ours. So the methods which are suitable for them may not suitable for us. Her methods may be harmful to our health.Again, I would state my objection about this issue after analyzing the two reasons. We should pay no attention to famous people’s opinions.
满分要素剖析
一、语言表达
1、As we all know, athletes are healthy and stout, their body bearing strength is better than ours.本句的优美在于其用词的地道。Stout指的是结识的，相当于strong，但是却没有strong那么俗，比较形容运动员身体时候很地道。第二个好词在于bear 这里的bearing strength相当于have power，但是比have power这种表达更加高明。
2、I would state my objection about this issue after analyzing the two reasons. 这句话是一个反驳句式，指的大家记忆，就是作者反对论点是基于以上两个看法。
3、In my point of view, I have no doubt that we should pay less attention to those opinions even we are their fans.这里的In my point of view,承接上文引出下文，have no doubt that是一个句型，表示没有疑问。
二、逻辑结构
文章是总分总的结构，同样也是正正的结构，两个正面叙述的段落很好的支持了总论点。这里没有让步，属于一个绝对型的文章，实际中我们并不提倡，如果可以的话，还是在两个正面叙述段后加一个补段。但是本文理由非常充分，不失为一篇简单的满分文章。
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