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Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People love to visit museums when traveling to new places. I think this is because museums tell them a lot about the culture of those new and unknown destinations. Museums are also fun. It’s almost impossible to get bored in a museum. Every museum will have at least one interesting thing for everybody.
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When visiting a new place, you can find out about the culture of that place in many ways. You can go to a movie or a place of worship or a nightclub. Another option is to sit in the park and listen to the people around you. The easiest way to learn about a place's culture, though, is by visiting its museums. Museums will show you the history of the place you're visiting. They’ll show you what art the locals think is important.
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Museums are fun. Even if you're not interested in art or history, there is always something to get your attention. Many museums now have what they call "hands-on" exhibits. These were originally designed to keep children occupied while their parents were looking at exhibits. However, museums have found that adults enjoy hands-on opportunities just as much as children. These exhibits have activities like pushing a button to hear more about what you're looking at, creating your own work of art, or trying on clothes like those on the models in the museum.
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本段是一个总分的结构，分为两个小部分。首先第一句话即点明了主旨。第一小部分说博物馆很有意思，有一些为小孩儿的"hands-on" exhibits。第二部分进一步说，这些小东西对大人仍然很有吸引力。 |
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People also enjoy visiting museums with unusual subjects. For instance, in my hometown there's a museum devoted to the potato. This museum has art made out of potatoes. It also tells all about the history of the potato, and sells potato mementos like key chains and potato dolls. People enjoy visiting this museum because it's different. It’s not something they'd find in their hometown and the museum's curator enjoy talking about the Great Potato.
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Museums are popular because they are about us. They are about our past and they reflect our creations, our values, and our dreams. No matter who you are or what you like, somewhere there is a museum that will amaze and interest you.
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满分因素剖析
一、语言表达
这篇文章在语言方面非常优秀。作者运用了各种从句，非谓语动词结构，句子十分饱满，句式富于多变，长短句搭配合理，使考官眼前一亮。而在用词方面，作者在关键的位置都使用了明显的逻辑连接词，这样使得文章各个部分衔接自然，逻辑也很清晰。
1. These exhibits have activities like pushing a button to hear more about what you're looking at, creating your own work of art, or trying on clothes like those on the models in the museum.
此句中，Like前面省略了that，引导定语从句，修饰activities。宾语从句what引导宾语从句，在like后面从句中做宾语，creating....和trying为非谓语动词，在句中做宾语。这句话是多种从句嵌套的结构，虽然复杂但是不累赘，彰显了作者的语法功底。
2. For instance, in my hometown there's a museum devoted to the potato.
此句中，短语for instance的意思是“例如”，等同于for example，用来引出证明观点的例子。Devote to的意思是“致力于”，其中的to是介词，后面要接动词的ing结构。Devote to是一个很美的短语，带有很强的的感情色彩，比一般的be interested in和be engaged in要生动，相同意思的单词还有dedicate to，contribute to。
3. They are about our past and they reflect our creations, our values, and our dreams.
此句话的意思是“博物馆代表了我们的过去，它反映了我们的创造，我们的价值和我们的梦想”。这句话非常有哲理，它概括了博物馆在对人类“历史、人文、及人类发展”方面贡献，作为文章的结尾，起到的升华主题的作用。
二、逻辑结构
本文是正正正的大正型支持文章，结构标准，逻辑清晰。文章首段写的非常标准，简单明了，并对下文的几个正文段都用几个词组进行了概括，纵览全文。中间论证部分充实而饱满，从三个不同的角度诠释了博物馆的意义。而尾段再次对博物馆受欢迎的原因进行了总结，并对文章的主题进行升华。这篇文章可谓是“虎头，猪肚，豹尾”，让人读上去很享受。
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