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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
I disagree strongly with the idea that the same amount of money should go to university sports activities as to university libraries. Although playing sports is a wonderful way to learn about teamwork, strategy and reaching your goals, it should not be the principal focus of a university education.
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本段是一个总分的结构。首先第一句话即点明了主旨。后面第二句话对主旨进行了简要分析。第三句话先进行了一个小让步，承认呢了体育活动的必要性，但是还是坚持学校要重视学习这个观点。 |
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Students need the most up-to-date library facilities available to get the best education. These include computerized programs and access to internet research databases that students can use to find information all around the world. Many of these facilities are very expensive to found and to maintain. If a university is only offering its students resources of a decade ago, it’s depriving those students of a tremendous amount of information.
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Even the book and magazine budgets of universities has gone up tremendously in the last decade. More is being published on every subject, and every university wants to have this information available to its students. The primacy and necessity of education and up-to-date knowledge are the end goal for all educational institutions.
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本段是文章的第三段，也就是正文第二段，写了支持作者立场的第二个分论点。 |
It also costs money for universities to keep their libraries open. Students need to have access to all the libraries' research tools as much of time as possible. Because students are young and can stay up all night studying, many universities are starting to leave their libraries open all night during exam periods. This costs money, because the staff has to be paid extra to be there. It also costs money to run the building (electricity, heat) during that time.
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本段是一个总分的结构。首先第一句话即点明了主旨，维持图书馆等等也需要大量金钱。后面对主旨进行了简要分析。 |
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Students at universities are only going to benefit from their education if they have access to all the tools they need to learn. Sports are secondary to the resources provided to students by university libraries. For this reason, libraries should always be better funded than sport activities.
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本段是一个分总的结构。首先第一句话队上文进行了承接，第二句话简要进行了让步，承认了体育运动的重要性。第三句话对全文主论点进行了重述。 |
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满分因素剖析：
一、语言表达
本文虽然字数较少，但句式丰富。作者熟练使用定语从句，宾语从句，条件状语从句等复合从句结构，是文章句式富于变化。同时在用词方面，作者使用很多高级词汇和固定搭配，是文章语言生动形象，传情达意准确而地道，彰显了作者的语言水平。
1. These include computerized programs and access to internet research databases that students can use to find information all around the world.
此句中，用到两个高级摧毁computerize 和access。Computerize是动词computer的动词化用法，结尾加ed做形容词意思是“电脑化的，程序化的”。名词短语access to后面解名词或动词的ing形式，表示进入...的途径。
2. If a university is only offering its students resources of a decade ago, it’s depriving those students of a tremendous amount of information.
此句中，用到两个高级词汇deprive和tremendous。动词短语Deprive sb of sth意思是剥夺某人某项权利，同义词还有“cheat sb of sth”。形容词Tremendous意思为“庞大的”，常用来形容“信息量，速度”等看不见的事务，可以成为土鳖用法“big, huge, large”的一种高级替代。
3. The primacy and necessity of education and up-to-date knowledge are the end goal for all educational institutions.
此句中，复合词up-to-date表示“当下的，最新的”。名词短语end goal表示最终的目标。End作为名词还有“目的”的含义，在阅读和写作中常常会出现“means”与“end”的关系论证，即“途径与目的”，大家不妨记住这种用法，用在写作中可以提高文章的思辨性。
二、逻辑结构
本文是正正正的大正型支持文章，结构标准，逻辑清晰。文章首段写的非常标准，简单明了，并对下文的几个正文段都用几个词组进行了概括。
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