小技巧：背景信息+收尾
段内结构：主题句+ 背景+ 解释+ 举例+ 收尾
Spending more money on teacher’s salary could help to upgrade the overall quality of teachers, which is the most important index of education.
主题句：提高薪水有助于教育质量的提高。
Nowadays, top talents, as scare resources deserving high price in the market, are reluctant to choose teaching as their career, since generally teachers earn much less than doctors, lawyers and scientists.
背景信息：工资的微薄影响了老师这个行业对于人才的吸引力。
In that sense, paying teachers decent salary may be the most effective way to encourage more talents to enter into education. After all, only with excellent educators can the quality of education be superior. The Renaissance era witnessed the emerging of many great talents, which is largely because, at that time, there were groups of great teachers and educators who were great minds themselves.
论证+举例：用文艺复兴时期的人才辈出来论证好老师对教育质量的重要性。
Therefore, with a direct increase on teachers’ salary, we tend to see more and more outstanding graduates choosing to be teachers and thusly a great boost in education quality.
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小技巧：排比举例
段内结构：主题句+ 解释+ 例子
Young people are the main driving force behind the boost in the economy.
主题句：年轻人在推动经济的发展
In today’s business world where products are becoming increasingly identical to each others, it is creativity rather than experience that is the key to product differentiation and then profit maximization. Considering that creativity and imagination only peak at a young age, it is not surprising that millionaires in the world are younger and younger.
解释：年轻人的创造力赋予他们创造财富的能力。
The founders of Google, Larry Page and Sergey Brin used a garage as their first office when they were 25-year old; Steve Jobs started his apple empire at his parent’s garage when he was only 21 years old. Other examples include the founder of Amazon, Hewlett-Package, Disney, Youtube, etc. These young entrepreneurs are all the best illustration that young people are changing the world.
排比举例
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