小技巧：背景来加细节
段内结构：主题句+ 背景+ 解释
There is no better way to renew than to travel.
主题句：旅行是缓压的最好方式。
Immersing themselves into endless meetings, interminable tasks and consecutive orders every day, people, nowadays, tend to suffer a series of social and health problems, as aptly illustrated by Japan which is pestered with high suicide rate, soaring divorce rate and prevailing sub-health among its white-collar workers who, due to the intense competition, are forced to work over 70 hours a week.
背景信息：现在人压力很大。
When it comes to this, taking a trip is not only an option but also a necessity to unload elites’ pressure and keep them healthy. They should say goodbye to skyscrapers and have some days of country life, enjoy the closeness to nature and the gentle pace of living, just as a river rushing passionately past rocks and waterfalls still needs to slow down sometimes to keep its resilience.
解释主题句，打比方来证明缓解压力的重要性。
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