今天推送新东方章棣老师的托福写作：
Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past.
虽然很多同学都写作人口增加导致压力增加，但是章棣老师的语言流畅性和论证的角度，都让人惊叹。模仿章棣老师段落的语言和逻辑，有助你写出高分作文。
展开方法：现在和过去的对比/按照逻辑和时间的先后顺序依次论述
The lifestyle these days may have contributed to the decline in the health enjoyed by the general public. 分论点：生活方式的改变导致现在人不健康。
The human population has undergone a significant increase for the past centuries. More and more people are coming out looking for a job. They compete with each other for a single chance of promotion. They cut down the time that should be for sleep. They cancel their vacations so that they could prepare better for presentations that could earn them billion-dollar clients. Even when they are having breakfast, they are holding newspaper in order to find business opportunities. And lack of relaxation may have directly caused the horrifying effect on the health of the modern population. 现在的情况：人口增加à竞争加剧à休息时间减少à健康恶化
People in the past might have less income and fewer things to buy and entertain themselves, but the positive side of this was that they didn’t have to work that hard in order to have a comparatively decent life, based on the standard of those days. They could have many hours to their own, which was why they could be healthier.过去的情况：竞争不激烈à有休息时间à健康
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