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What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
I think the most important discovery that has been the most beneficial for people in my country is the invention of Internet. So far as I can tell, the Internet has been beneficial to people around the globe. My view is a commonsense one, based on the fact that the Web is a vast storehouse of information and opinion, which can be scientific, literary, political, sporting or sexual. Anyone with access to a computer and a dialup connection can unlock the door and trawl through its offerings.
The Internet can be used as a broad base of knowledge that contributes to the educational system. Students and teachers benefit from the use of the Internet, as well as administrators and others outside of formal education. Students benefit because the Internet provides a resource to supplemental information for any subject. Educators benefit because the Internet provides a vast knowledge base to prepare for topics. People are not only learning from the Internet, they are contributing and sharing knowledge through networked communities. The Internet is the advancement of education for all its users.
Internet can deliver better customer services to people. The Internet is changing the way we do business. Using Internet broadcasting, we are able to target the right audience, prepare and present a technical presentation on a popular topic, interact with new customers, and collect hundreds of highly qualified leads. As Internet companies continue to find innovative ways to leverage the capabilities of the Internet for businesses, the more we will learn how to provide optimal solutions for customers. Which in turn, will greatly benefit people.
The Internet today is a way to transfer and share information. On the whole, it is a benefit to individuals of all kinds. We do have problems surrounding the Internet that need to be solved, but as with all new technologies there are debates and opinions. Since the Internet technology is spreading, it will soon become as popular as all other forms of communication. If you have not tried it, do so.
满分要素剖析：
一、 语言表达
本文在语言表达上表现了细节上的严谨，从情态动词的选用，到句式上的多种变化，都体现了不同情况下的不同选择，作者展现了自己对于词汇和句式的把控，十分值得学习。
1. My view is a commonsense one, based on the fact that the Web is a vast storehouse of information and opinion, which can be scientific, literary, political, sporting or sexual. 这是一个长难句。首先based on动词过去分词做定语，修饰前一句的my view，接着是which引导的非限定性定语从句，修饰the Web。Commonsense表示常识性的，Vast表示巨大的，can be体现了用词上的严谨，表现网络的灵活性和多样性。
2. Using Internet broadcasting, we are able to target the right audience, prepare and present a technical presentation on a popular topic, interact with new customers, and collect hundreds of highly qualified leads. 这里use的现在分词结构做方式状语，be able to取代can，更侧重和强调一项能力的具备，而不是这项能力的使用。Target，prepare，present，interact with，collect一系列的动词动作广泛地展示了网络的实用性。
3. So far as I can tell, the Internet has been beneficial to people around the globe.
So far as I can tell是一个固定结构，so还可以换成as，表示就我所知，也可以换成as far as I know。Be beneficial to表示对…有益，从…获得好处。
二、 逻辑结构
本文是从正面的角度讨论网络给人们生活带来的各种便利，并选取其中两个方面展开来论述，支持自己的观点。文章以网络的巨大信息量为基点展开，从教育，商业两个方面分别阐述了网络的好处。在文章末尾，作者进行了一定的让步，首尾呼应，展现出思维的严密和逻辑的全面性。
文章是总分总的结构，每个分论点也是以总分的结构展开。
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