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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A person should never make an important decision alone. Important decisions should be well thought out and with the consultation of close and trusted friends and family who know you well and know what is best for you. People close to you can give you good advice, give you a different perspective, or share their own experiences.
When I had difficulty deciding which classes to take in college, I talked to my teachers and advisors. They had the knowledge and expertise to help me determine which classes were the best ones to take for my future career. Without their advice, I might have chosen unsuitable courses. In college, I had convinced myself that I was not good enough to act in the school play. Therefore, I decided not to audition even though drama had always been my passion. The day of the auditions, a friend of mine asked me why I wasn't auditioning. When I told her I didn't feel I was good enough, she was shocked. She was able to provide me with another perspective on myself and my talents. I rethought my decision and tried out... and got a lead in the play.
Last year when I was trying to decide whether or not I should study overseas, I talked to my friend. This was the best thing I could have done. This was a big decision for me because I had never been overseas on my own and I wasn't sure I could do it. She had studied overseas the previous year. She told me about the challenges and opportunities I might encounter and helped me make the right decision. I finally decided to go abroad and it was amazing!
Whenever I am faced with an important decision, I seek advice from others so that I am well-informed and have the benefit of their perspective and experience.
满分因素剖析：
一. 语言表达
本文的语言使用非常优美，句式富于多变，长短句搭配合理，运用了大量从句和非谓语动词结构，使考官眼前一亮。而在用词上，文中词汇运用十分地道，表达生动，凸显了作者的很优秀的语言功底。这些都使得文章更加吸引考官的眼球。
1. Important decisions should be well thought out and with the consultation of close and trusted friends and family who know you well and know what is best for you.
本句是一个由被动语态和多个从句嵌套的复合句结构。本段的主语句中，who know you well是一个定语从句，修饰friends and family。what is best for you是一个由what引导的宾语从句，做及物动词know的宾语。
2. When facing the difficulty to decide which classes to take in college, it is the teachers and advisors that help me make my decisions.
本句是一个非谓语从句加强调句的形式。When 后面接非谓语动词，做时间状语。在托福和
3. Whenever I am faced with an important decision, I seek advice from others so that I am well-informed and have the benefit of their perspective and experience.
本句中，whenever引导让步状语从句，意识为“无论何时”，同样的用法还有“not matter when”。be faced with是一个托福作文中的常见短语，意思是“面临着”，类似的表达还有come across, be encountered with。well-informed 是一个常用的复合词，做形容词，表示“有见识的”。so that连在一起意思是“以便....”，引导目的状语从句，同样的用法还有in order that。
二. 逻辑结构
本篇采用标准的五段论结构，开头表明观点，引出分论点。中间论证部分采用正正正的三段大正论证结构。结尾承接上文，收束全文，再次阐明观点。文章的结构很标准，逻辑顺序很清晰，观点呈现一目了然。
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