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Is the ability to read and write more important today than in the past? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today more than at any time in the history of the world, it is important to be able to read and write. This change has been brought about by the Internet, which we use to communicate with one another, to get our news, and to sell our products.
Millions of people communicate today through e-mail using the Internet. In the past people would have face-to–face meetings or call one another on the phone, or write letters; today they use e-mail and chat rooms on the internet. It is obviously necessary to be able to read and write in order to participate in this technological revolution.
Today, one can subscribe to news and information services on the Net. When you turn on your computer in the morning, you are given the headlines, financial news, sports scores, or the social events that you requested. Some people still getting the news from the television or radio, yet getting your news from the Internet is more efficient since the news is tailored to your specific interests. And also the speed is much faster.
E-commerce also demands that people be able to write and read. Of course, the people who design retail websites, must be able to express themselves clearly in writing. Potential customers must be able to read the product descriptions. In the past, people would go into stores (as many still do today) and point to objects that they would like to buy. This physical approach to shopping does not require any special language skills.
The Internet will force us all to become more literate, not only in reading and writing, but also with computers. Today, we must be skilled readers and writers to be successful in the high tech world.
满分要素剖析
一、语言表达
1、Some people still getting the news from the television or radio, yet getting your news from the Internet is more efficient since the news is tailored to your specific interests.本句话的非常长，而且结构比较复杂，前半句写了一些人对作法，后面用一个yet进行了转折，这样的复杂句式我们要学会书写。
2、The Internet will force us all to become more literate, not only in reading and writing, but also with computers.本句比较简短，但是用了一个not only …but also…的句式，指的我们来好好借鉴一下。
3、It is obviously necessary to be able to read and write in order to participate in this technological revolution.本句话很好，主要是句子虽然不长，但是结构非常鲜明。这里的in order to 的意思是为了，technological revolution是我们要讨论的互联网发展对人们的益处。
二、逻辑结构：
本文是一个正正正的支持结构，用了大量的对比，今昔对比，各种情况对比等等。这些论证方法都极大程度上的使文章结构清晰，说理充分，并且最终取得高分。在我们的作文中，建议大家多使用这样的论证方法，更好的凸显全文主旨。
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