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Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I think that children should begin to learn a foreign language as soon as they start school. Even many parents taught their children the foreign language before elementary school. It is obvious that really necessary.
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首段，第一句话讲出作者观点，第二句话简单介绍背景。 |
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首段为文章提供了背景，陈述了作者论点。 |
People can learn a language easily when they are young. Many older people often say that they are too old to learn a foreign language. They can't remember the words or phrases even after hundreds of times reciting. It's hard for them in faith, but while it's quite different from the young. A healthy child has a better and quicker memory, so the new things he learned may not be forgotten easily with the process of time.
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本段是一个总分的结构。开头提出论点，即年少时学习语言会更有优势。后面对论点进行了进一步解释，说明小孩子比起成年人，记忆力更快更好，所以新东西学得更快。 |
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本段是文章第二段，提出了正文的第一个支持论点，年轻人比老年人学习起来更轻松。并从第一个方面，即老年人和年轻人在记忆力等主观条件上的差别会影响到学习能力。 |
When you go to the primary school, you begin to learn the knowledge from your teachers. Most of them use their native language while teaching you. If you don't touch the foreign language you want to learn, the longer you receive the education, the more difficult for you to learn it. More and more opportunities to speak Chinese will affect on the consequence of foreign language study directly, unless we start learning it as soon as the school begins.
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分总的结构。首先从反面举例，然后接着解释说明如果不从小开始打基础，就会越来越难接受另外一门语言的学习。 |
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本段是文章第三段，是正文的第一个支持论点下的第二个方面的论证，即随着年龄的增长，周边环境造成的干扰会越来越大。 |
Another reason for early language study is that the young may dare to talk with foreigners and it's a very good chance to practice oral skills. As you know, many grown-ups are bashful to talk with the foreigners, but Grade One or Two students can do so very easily, for they don't care their grammar or expressions right or not. In fact, neither do the foreigners. If they start to learn a foreign language as soon as they go to school, they may also talk with each other in it. What a good chance! It will help a lot, I think.
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总分的结构，开头提出论点，即年轻人更有勇气跟外国人交谈，这对口语是很好的练习和巩固。后面一句话对论点进行了进一步解释。 |
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本段是文章第四段，提出了正文的第二个正面支持论点。 |
In a word, learning a foreign language as soon as starting school is helpful and important. It's not a burden but one of the best ways of learning.
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本段总结观点，首尾呼应。 |
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满分要素剖析：
一、 语言表达
本文的语词和句式十分丰富，使用了较多的固定句型和短语，比如unless从句，as soon as从句，文章末尾感叹句的使用，还有in a word，in fact，be bashful to等词组，都让文章的语言表达更具有多样性，也展现出作者一定的遣词用句的能力。
If you don't touch the foreign language you want to learn, the longer you receive the education, the more difficult for you to learn it. 这句话中出现了the+比较级…the+比较级的句型，表示越来越…的意思，丰富了文章的句式。
As you know, many grown-ups are bashful to talk with the foreigners, but Grade One or Two students can do so very easily, for they don't care their grammar or expressions right or not. In fact, neither do the foreigners. 首先表示否定的“也”，句中用了neither加倒装句的句式;for在这个句子中用作连词表原因，与because相似，但它不表示直接原因，是带出附加或推断的理由;grown-ups代表成年人，避免了重复率高的older people或者adults;in fact和be bashful to也都是可以学习的词组，丰富文章的语汇。
It's not a burden but one of the best ways of learning. 这个看起来很轻松的句子，隐藏了not…but…的句型，表示转折。在这里作者用这个句子再次否定了对立面的想法，肯定了自己的观点，达到轻松但是最全面的效果。
二、 逻辑结构
文章中用了对比论证的方法。首先提出分论点，然后在同一个分论点下对比年轻人和老年人这两个群体的不同情况来论证自己的观点，也有单从反面推出年纪大的人群容易受到较大的固定语言环境的影响，从而应该从年轻的时候就开始学习。这种正反对比论证的方式相比于单从同一个角度出发来组建架构来说更容易使文章显得立体丰满，也比较全面。
在全文结构上，是采用总分总的结构，开篇立题，随后分论点展开论述，最后结尾总结点题。
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